Douluo: the Original Martial Soul, the System Came Thirty Years Earlier
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Traveling through the Douluo Continent, six-year-old Lin Ye has just awakened his martial soul and has innate soul power of level seven. He has not been happy for a minute when he hears a system prompt: "The Wuhun Palace has been destroyed. As the deacon of the Wuhun Palace, your martial soul has been abolished. You are unwilling to accept it. You want to counterattack and rebuild the glory of the Wuhun Palace!" A system that was thirty years earlier? Haha, he is familiar with this routine! ............[New book is on the shelves, please collect it and recommend it! ]
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Official(51)Scraped 23d ago
I have seen ugly novels, but I have never seen such a mentally retarded person. You are also a talent. You can write it by yourself using AI without using your brain at all.
The protagonist Soul Sect. In the end, no one noticed it, they were all stunned. It's like you get perfect marks on a test, but no one looks down on you. How is this possible? You have no brains at all.
It only took ten chapters to go from level 7 to level 40. What kind of thing did you write? Tell me. If you write like this, you might as well just write it as a titled Douluo.
At first I thought some people were complaining about leveling up quickly, but I thought it was because they had too many things to do. After reading more than a dozen chapters, I understood. The plot is like riding a rocket. It feels like the outline is released, without any details, just do the task, rush, do the task, rush.
It feels inexplicable. Less than a year after you awakened the martial spirit, you have already reached level 40. Not to mention, you started running to the martial spirit hall and people ignored you, and then you went to be a dog. I can't understand it.
With this way of writing, I can't even figure out the meaning of joining Wuhun Palace. The characters are written stupidly. If a 6 or 7 year old great soul master can't be taken seriously, this organization deserves to be destroyed. Then look at the missions. If the missions were issued according to the situation 30 years later and Tang San was troubled, he would have been killed on the spot.
I immediately gave up the book when I saw that he was two years younger than Tang San.
If you're younger than Tang San, you're not worth mentioning. I've even seen a book where Tang San participated in the finals of the Soul Master Competition. He didn't awaken his spirit until he awakened his spirit. I'm really going to be laughed to death by saying that my destiny is up to me.
It's a pure SB novel. I don't know why I wrote it.
A pure batch of writing methods, blind jb enhancements, and various cheats
You damn stallion, you have to take a girl with you when you go out for training
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Official(51)Scraped 23d ago
I have seen ugly novels, but I have never seen such a mentally retarded person. You are also a talent. You can write it by yourself using AI without using your brain at all.
The protagonist Soul Sect. In the end, no one noticed it, they were all stunned. It's like you get perfect marks on a test, but no one looks down on you. How is this possible? You have no brains at all.
It only took ten chapters to go from level 7 to level 40. What kind of thing did you write? Tell me. If you write like this, you might as well just write it as a titled Douluo.
At first I thought some people were complaining about leveling up quickly, but I thought it was because they had too many things to do. After reading more than a dozen chapters, I understood. The plot is like riding a rocket. It feels like the outline is released, without any details, just do the task, rush, do the task, rush.
It feels inexplicable. Less than a year after you awakened the martial spirit, you have already reached level 40. Not to mention, you started running to the martial spirit hall and people ignored you, and then you went to be a dog. I can't understand it.
With this way of writing, I can't even figure out the meaning of joining Wuhun Palace. The characters are written stupidly. If a 6 or 7 year old great soul master can't be taken seriously, this organization deserves to be destroyed. Then look at the missions. If the missions were issued according to the situation 30 years later and Tang San was troubled, he would have been killed on the spot.
I immediately gave up the book when I saw that he was two years younger than Tang San.
If you're younger than Tang San, you're not worth mentioning. I've even seen a book where Tang San participated in the finals of the Soul Master Competition. He didn't awaken his spirit until he awakened his spirit. I'm really going to be laughed to death by saying that my destiny is up to me.
It's a pure SB novel. I don't know why I wrote it.
A pure batch of writing methods, blind jb enhancements, and various cheats
You damn stallion, you have to take a girl with you when you go out for training
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