The Road to Immortal Fishing
About This Novel
The world of practice is an endless sea. Lu Changqing, who traveled through time as a seventy-year-old man, had to embark on a journey to seek immortality in order to survive. With the help of the Black Moon Pendant, he opened up a deserted island in this boundless sea, raised fairy fish, married an immortal Taoist couple along the way, spread his branches, and expanded his family...
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Official(51)Scraped 21d ago
The author comes and takes a look. . .
The theme is very good, and this type of theme is relatively good. However, the front of the protagonist's golden finger is too blurry, and the character portrayal is too artificial. Be natural and go for casual style. If it is not changed, many readers will be discouraged. I hope the author changes his writing style. However, this book cannot be changed. If the author writes a new book, I hope he can continue with this theme. Change it to a casual style, don't change it to that disgusting writing style. This is a novel, not a masterpiece. It is meant to be comfortable, not to be pretentious. Be natural. There is a lot of potential for books in the old-age leisure style nowadays. It's not that I don't want to give high praise, but this book is sick. I'm a 2000+ hour old bookworm, believe me,.
I really can't give a high score
You travel through time and become an old man, you have a golden finger, and you have to run to be a slave. It is better to call it a bond. The various settings are completely unreasonable. The family actually looks at the faces of the vassals. The eldest lady of the family is actually moved by the old man whom she has just met a few times. While talking about the cruelty of the spiritual world, the servants are even tougher than the master family. The author always compares corporate employees. This is the spiritual world, not a job. There are too many, I don't want to talk about it.
The protagonist is a licking dog
She still looks down on other dog lickers, acting like a dog slave, but she still feels good about herself and thinks she is awesome.
Not interesting
. . . . . . . . . ,,,
of it
One zigzag ruins the entire book. A monk is just a monk, what kind of cultivation is this? Do you want to forcefully imitate classical Chinese? Painting a tiger cannot be compared to a dog...
I feel that this author has not found his own path yet, and when it comes to writing books, he is either trying to write without caring about how well he writes, or he is constantly pursuing and trying to write as well as possible, but I don't know which case it is.
It gives me a headache just to see it.
Can you write the paragraph you wrote in a different way? . It is recommended to start from scratch and rewrite the sentences to make sure it works🔥
It was originally a good book, but the author's changes caused few people to read it.
It was originally a good book, but due to the author's inconvenience, not many people have read it. The author said that he had to use a hammer to hit his eggs because he didn't want them to hurt. I really admire you. Author
of hammer
If you are tired of looking at the monks, then you must be a monk. Are you stupid if you insist on doing it successfully?
This book is average
Slightly poisonous, the routine is too old, the plot is too unreasonable, and it is forced to reduce intelligence.
Rating
Community(0)
Official(51)Scraped 21d ago
The author comes and takes a look. . .
The theme is very good, and this type of theme is relatively good. However, the front of the protagonist's golden finger is too blurry, and the character portrayal is too artificial. Be natural and go for casual style. If it is not changed, many readers will be discouraged. I hope the author changes his writing style. However, this book cannot be changed. If the author writes a new book, I hope he can continue with this theme. Change it to a casual style, don't change it to that disgusting writing style. This is a novel, not a masterpiece. It is meant to be comfortable, not to be pretentious. Be natural. There is a lot of potential for books in the old-age leisure style nowadays. It's not that I don't want to give high praise, but this book is sick. I'm a 2000+ hour old bookworm, believe me,.
I really can't give a high score
You travel through time and become an old man, you have a golden finger, and you have to run to be a slave. It is better to call it a bond. The various settings are completely unreasonable. The family actually looks at the faces of the vassals. The eldest lady of the family is actually moved by the old man whom she has just met a few times. While talking about the cruelty of the spiritual world, the servants are even tougher than the master family. The author always compares corporate employees. This is the spiritual world, not a job. There are too many, I don't want to talk about it.
The protagonist is a licking dog
She still looks down on other dog lickers, acting like a dog slave, but she still feels good about herself and thinks she is awesome.
Not interesting
. . . . . . . . . ,,,
of it
One zigzag ruins the entire book. A monk is just a monk, what kind of cultivation is this? Do you want to forcefully imitate classical Chinese? Painting a tiger cannot be compared to a dog...
I feel that this author has not found his own path yet, and when it comes to writing books, he is either trying to write without caring about how well he writes, or he is constantly pursuing and trying to write as well as possible, but I don't know which case it is.
It gives me a headache just to see it.
Can you write the paragraph you wrote in a different way? . It is recommended to start from scratch and rewrite the sentences to make sure it works🔥
It was originally a good book, but the author's changes caused few people to read it.
It was originally a good book, but due to the author's inconvenience, not many people have read it. The author said that he had to use a hammer to hit his eggs because he didn't want them to hurt. I really admire you. Author
of hammer
If you are tired of looking at the monks, then you must be a monk. Are you stupid if you insist on doing it successfully?
This book is average
Slightly poisonous, the routine is too old, the plot is too unreasonable, and it is forced to reduce intelligence.
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