This Villain is Too Popular

There are more than two hundred chapters in the second season, and the result is that the protagonist is in the late stage of level 2, and his combat power is in the late stage of level 3, which is easy. The content is getting more and more refined, the map is smaller and smaller, and there are no foreign invasions like the abyss, demons, or gods that I thought. There are only internal contradictions. At present, I only feel that it has the power of planetary warfare and breaks the hereditary monopoly of the nobles. I am pretending to be a bit tired of aesthetics. Since you have to wait until the end of the show to upgrade to the protagonist, don't keep saying that you have to wait until the end of the show to finally upgrade. I already know what preparations you have made. What else do I expect? Isn't it just an extra ability or superpower? Drive high and go low.

So-so, the system setting is similar to Douluo, the innate star source matches the innate soul power, the transplanted star core matches the martial soul, and the so-called two-dimensional protagonist brother and sister are the setting of dual martial souls. At the beginning, I said I needed to solve the problem of brain overclocking and put together the puzzle of the combat power system, but in the end, I was running all the way to puzzle out the plot clues. By the 60th chapter, I couldn't even finish it after I saw the introduction. Is this from a female channel? One bug after another, it was clear that he was an S-class genius who traveled through time two years ago and took out a million-dollar loan, but in his memories, the original protagonist was already an S-class genius several years ago. No matter how strong the protagonist is now, he looks just as clownish as before when he took out the loan. Looking back on the plot, it feels like he is forcibly establishing an emotional foundation with an important female character, and there is also a hint of the author's self-impression in it.

Purely author's self-pleasure article What's wrong with my writing skills? I just wrote a lot of pretentious plots that were embarrassing to death.

Why do I feel that Majun is imitating Gojo Satoru? What guys want to see is the Promax version of Gojo Satoru, not the whole "poor imitation" thing. Your panel surpasses Gojo Satoru, but as a result, the character design is purely based on Gojo Satoru, then I feel that you are not even as good as the original version.

It's just a cool article. I put up with the little bugs in the plot, settings, and writing. It looked fine at the beginning, but after the first wave of settlement, I just let myself go. I watched the plot myself, and I also picked out some of the dialogues to emphasize. There were also self-talk barrage chats interspersed with the protagonist's thoughts. The result was a lot of nonsense, which made people want to skip it directly. However, some protagonists skipped the subsequent planning for fear of missing some information about the protagonist. There are still several chapters. Force feeding💩

1. The protagonist is out of touch, acting cute, and talking serious nonsense, but in fact it is not funny or happy at all, at least it is not easy for readers to feel it. 2. The main character's name is Tiandao Siming, or Tiandao for short. They all call the protagonist this way. This name is easy to create drama. In other fantasy novels about cultivating immortals, the final boss is Tiandao. In this book, the protagonist is directly named Tiandao. 3. The protagonist wears sunglasses, says pretentious lines, and performs pretentious actions, but it doesn't feel good, nor does it feel good to slap the opponent in the face. There is no feeling of pleasure.

The first few dozen chapters are barely readable. Tiandao is still good, but it becomes less and less good later on. First of all, Tiandao is becoming more and more funny. I feel that the male protagonist is like a primary school student, trying too hard to be cute. Caroline's description is weird, like the male protagonist's nemesis. The original male protagonist's role is too small, at least 50 to 50. The barrage and normal dialogue are not separated, they are all piled up. There are still problems with the plot later, let's not talk about it for now. In fact, it's not too bad. If you like Japanese cool writing, you can read it.

It can be seen that I have tried very hard to make the protagonist look high-class, but the writing skills are not good enough and it just makes people feel low. There is no energy at all in what I say, and I feel like I am acting coquettishly.

I hope the author can write the protagonist to kill more decisively, and not write it exactly like Gojo Satoru. He could clearly eradicate the source of the danger in the early stage but left it alone, making the situation uncontrollable later. This is not confidence but stupidity. And why does it feel like this plot is going to overlap with the Curse Return plot?

Those people rated it 9. Or so, tricking me into killing them, and the more I watched, the more awkward I became. I thought it would be better later, but in the end I was poisoned to death, which left me with a psychological shadow.