The Afterglow of the Late Tang Dynasty
by Snow Panda
About This Novel
The new book "My Brother Liu Jinu" is about the Sixteen Kingdoms in the late Eastern Jin Dynasty. Interested book friends are welcome to read it. The greatest joy for a man is to subdue the crowd, defeat the enemy, seize everything he has, ride his horse, and have his beautiful wives and concubines. In the second year of Dazhong in the Tang Dynasty, Zhang Yichao from Shazhou recovered the two prefectures of Guasha, Ganzhou and Suzhou in the third year of Dazhong, Yizhou in the fourth year of Dazhong, and Liangzhou in the second year of Xiantong. It ends with Yiwu in the west and Lingwu in the east; it has a land of more than 4,000 miles and a household with a household registration of one million; the mountains and rivers of the six counties are like the old ones. In the fourth year of Qianfu, Zhang Yanli, the second son of Zhang Huaishen who later traveled through time, started from Dunhuang and recovered Hexi, Beiting, and Anxi. It took ten years to destroy the Uighurs, pacify Tubo, and pacify the Central Plains.
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Official(11)Scraped 21d ago
How should I put it? Firstly, there are few people writing about the subject matter, and secondly, I feel that the progress is too fast. I suggest the author take a closer look at Shao Renqi and write it in more detail. Why? Because generally people who read books on this kind of historical theme either read for fun or are obsessed with details. This book has a somewhat diary-like flow. For example, when I went to Chang'an, I felt that Pig's Foot went to Chang'an to meet his uncle, met the eunuch, and then returned home. Half a year has passed since I started writing. I've only read Chapter 200 or so, and Huang Chao has already entered Chang'an. It's too fast. I feel like this book is finished in less than 5-600 chapters. Of course, this is just my simple suggestion. Thank you
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A book with 1,000 chapters is enough for 2 million words. What's the point of having so much water? It lowers the performance of the work. If you have that time, you might as well start another book. Why don't you just go to Central Asia? The imperial court can't do anything to you. Your current position is just like the grassland forces. Without cavalry, the imperial court can't do anything to you. And if you want to deal with the grassland forces, you can only do it when the imperial court is at its peak. It's not easy to get gunpowder to fight across the river. Gunpowder is nothing more than nitrate, sulfur, and charcoal. As for the ratio, it only takes a day or two to try it out. Moreover, there was already gunpowder in the Tang Dynasty, but the ingredients were different.
The biggest problem above is that we ignored the shortcomings of the Uighur army in siege. The steppe cavalry is good at field battles but not good at siege. Every time the protagonist fights against the Uighurs, he always uses his own shortcomings to attack the enemy's strengths. It can be said to be very stupid. The people under his command still think that the protagonist is wise. If the prairie cavalry has the ability to siege cities, then there is nothing wrong with the Yuan Dynasty. The Central Plains have long been conquered by the prairie.
Let the emperor move the capital to Luoyang
Not giving him a chance to cause trouble, he went to harm the princes of Guandong and blocked Tongguan. From then on, there was no longer anything to do with Guandong and Guanzhong.
It was quite poor. In the end, it was not possible to dominate the world and carry out the industrial revolution... What was written about the most was to do it, do it on the spot, do it in public, and let everyone do it together...
Seen 137 times
The leader of a force went to Chang'an It's poisonous enough
This book can only be considered below average. It is out of stock. You can take a look.
Briquettes, open-hearth steelmaking, steam engines, gunpowder, they will always be the same!
It's really cool, it's really hard. One chapter a day, you're really cool.
If you write so slowly, go home and farm. If you write slowly, you will probably end up unfinished.
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Official(11)Scraped 21d ago
How should I put it? Firstly, there are few people writing about the subject matter, and secondly, I feel that the progress is too fast. I suggest the author take a closer look at Shao Renqi and write it in more detail. Why? Because generally people who read books on this kind of historical theme either read for fun or are obsessed with details. This book has a somewhat diary-like flow. For example, when I went to Chang'an, I felt that Pig's Foot went to Chang'an to meet his uncle, met the eunuch, and then returned home. Half a year has passed since I started writing. I've only read Chapter 200 or so, and Huang Chao has already entered Chang'an. It's too fast. I feel like this book is finished in less than 5-600 chapters. Of course, this is just my simple suggestion. Thank you
water
A book with 1,000 chapters is enough for 2 million words. What's the point of having so much water? It lowers the performance of the work. If you have that time, you might as well start another book. Why don't you just go to Central Asia? The imperial court can't do anything to you. Your current position is just like the grassland forces. Without cavalry, the imperial court can't do anything to you. And if you want to deal with the grassland forces, you can only do it when the imperial court is at its peak. It's not easy to get gunpowder to fight across the river. Gunpowder is nothing more than nitrate, sulfur, and charcoal. As for the ratio, it only takes a day or two to try it out. Moreover, there was already gunpowder in the Tang Dynasty, but the ingredients were different.
The biggest problem above is that we ignored the shortcomings of the Uighur army in siege. The steppe cavalry is good at field battles but not good at siege. Every time the protagonist fights against the Uighurs, he always uses his own shortcomings to attack the enemy's strengths. It can be said to be very stupid. The people under his command still think that the protagonist is wise. If the prairie cavalry has the ability to siege cities, then there is nothing wrong with the Yuan Dynasty. The Central Plains have long been conquered by the prairie.
Let the emperor move the capital to Luoyang
Not giving him a chance to cause trouble, he went to harm the princes of Guandong and blocked Tongguan. From then on, there was no longer anything to do with Guandong and Guanzhong.
It was quite poor. In the end, it was not possible to dominate the world and carry out the industrial revolution... What was written about the most was to do it, do it on the spot, do it in public, and let everyone do it together...
Seen 137 times
The leader of a force went to Chang'an It's poisonous enough
This book can only be considered below average. It is out of stock. You can take a look.
Briquettes, open-hearth steelmaking, steam engines, gunpowder, they will always be the same!
It's really cool, it's really hard. One chapter a day, you're really cool.
If you write so slowly, go home and farm. If you write slowly, you will probably end up unfinished.
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The greatest joy for a man is to subdue the crowd, defeat the enemy, seize everything he has, ride his horse, and have his beautiful wives and concubines. In the second year of Dazhong in the Tang Dynasty, Zhang Yichao from Shazhou recovered the two prefectures of Guasha, Ganzhou and Suzhou in the third year of Dazhong, Yizhou in the fourth year of Dazhong, and Liangzhou in the second year of Xiantong. It ends with Yiwu in the west and Lingwu in the east; it has more than 4,000 miles of land and a household with a household registration of one million; the mountains and rivers of the six counties are like the old ones. In the fourth year of Qianfu, Zhang Yanli, the second son of Zhang Huaishen who later traveled through, started from Dunhuang and recovered Hexi, Beiting, and Anxi. It took ten years to destroy the Uighurs, pacify Tubo, and pacify the Central Plains. In the following decades, he destroyed Safar and pacified Abbas, and conquered Rome in the west.
🌟🌟🌟Writing about the rebel army in the Western Regions in the late Tang Dynasty in the ninth century. I have written a lot recently. This book is not too bad, but there are too many war scenes, either fighting or on the way...
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