Mysterious Path

1. The plot is not thrilling enough. The nearly 180 chapters only tell a few dungeons. There are too few plots, too few supernatural creatures, and too few antiques. 2. The plot is procrastinating, the dialogue is procrastinating, and there are many chapters that are all about the protagonist and the fat man chatting and flirting. The plot can be summarized in a few sentences, but it contains more than a dozen or dozens of lines. The irrelevant plot takes up too much space. 3. The supporting characters are too bad, resulting in a weak growth environment for the protagonist. The heroine and bodyguards (money, power, force, interpersonal relationships) are all fully matched, and the distribution of character abilities is unreasonable.

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