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How can I put it, there are very few good books nowadays, and it takes some time to read the author's books from the starting point to Zongheng. The author works very hard and diligently, and has collected and digested a lot of historical materials, but he likes to incorporate the historical materials he knows into the text too much, and he also makes some comments and emotions from time to time. Occasionally, a small amount of historical materials and comments that meet the needs of the plot can be included, but they must be moderate and unobtrusive. Of course, these shortcomings are also found in other historical time travel and military novels. Some of them were scolded and abandoned like the authors, but some people tolerated these shortcomings because of the excitement of their plots and stories. The author is a master in this aspect. Since the Ming Dynasty 1617, readers have been criticizing you in chapter reviews. Why can't you change it? It is recommended that the author put aside his tendency to be dismissive of literary men, and study the works of the ungrateful Mr. Oscar Ou, and figure out how to tell the story smoothly and attractively, how to arrange the ungrateful plots, and how to design the main and branch plots with fewer flaws. Come out and write again. It's been almost ten years since the author posted articles on Qidian. I've polished my writing skills. The outline and setting are still okay. Although you say so much, the current online articles are really a mess. There are many people who write, and there are even more people who write more. You are at least quite serious.

In fact, the author's writing style is okay, but as most people say, it's too watery. Please, you are writing a novel, not interpreting official history, okay? If the author feels that what everyone is saying is wrong, please read your chapter as a reader and do some rough statistics yourself. In one chapter, how many words are you writing a novel and promoting the plot, and how many words are you interpreting official history and expressing your views on official history countless times? The writing is actually pretty good, but it's a pity that I can't write a good novel.

Although it is a eunuch, it is still a good book. The book is a good book, the writing is quite solid, and the logic is flawless. However, it is a bit too confusing, that is, there are too many words, and the plot develops very slowly, which affects the reading experience and readers' stickiness. The previous book "Da Ming 1617" had more than five million words written, and the plot was only written to dominate the world. The number of words is really too many. There are many examples of dropping book bags. For example, there are too many descriptions of steel and everyone's joy. In fact, many language can be simplified. In fact, many knowledge points and plots really do not need to be described in such detail, nor do they need to be elaborated over and over again. Writing too much will make it uncomfortable to read. I have many thoughts and opinions on the history of the Ming and Qing Dynasties, but when writing novels, you still have to pay attention to the plot. The author must be able to handle this well, and he may not be able to become a great writer.

It's well written, although the plot is a bit slow, but I finally reached the critical moment, don't let it end! The last book was like this. I hope the author will write more in the next one and not end like this!

It's annoying to read a lot of explanations after one sentence.

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The thirteenth year of Chongzhen was the driest year in the past 500 years in the North China Plain. Grain production in the entire North China Plain was reduced by 70 to 80%. Even the Grand Canal was blocked. No matter in the south of the Yangtze River or in North China, there was no limit to transporting grain to the Songjin Front. The army has no food and is outside. If you advance, you will win half the battle, but if you retreat, you will lose ten times and lose no victory. It is the best solution for Chongzhen to ask Hong Chengchou to take the initiative. Sun Chuanting collected taxes from the gentry in Xi'an at five times the tax rate. In the 16th year of Chongzhen, he had already levied the taxes of the 17th year of Chongzhen, the first year of Hongguang, the first year of Longwu, and the first year of Yongli. If he was not allowed to attack, he would have levied the taxes of the Kangxi period. By then, not to mention the refugees, even the gentry would have rebelled.

This is too exaggerated. Whether they are military households or tenant farmers, they must receive half of the food they produce, otherwise they will not be able to survive at all.

More than twenty taels a day, seven or eight hundred taels a year. I am really good at math and can go into business.

First of all, regardless of whether this book is really finished or there is still a prologue, I want to say thank you to the author. After all, there are so many articles about farming now that it is far from a best-selling subject matter. But the author still has the courage to publish articles, which is very respectable. Secondly, to be honest, this book reads more readers' comments than the author's text, so there are more responses to readers. It's not that I paid attention to this book because of its content, but to be honest, the cover was very well done, so I was deeply impressed by the cover. Thirdly, the reason why I paid attention to this book is that this book was recommended by the website at least once. It is probably because the results were not satisfactory, so it ended. But you and I have to recognize the laws of the market. Finally, I encourage authors to save 500,000 words when publishing a new book next time, and then upload updates, so that they can continue to exceed 2 million words. This is just my personal experience. Because this book and my copy of "Evil" are always in the top five recommendations of the History Channel, I feel really lonely losing you as a lovely competitor. If you are not convinced, quickly start the prologue and let's compete again. We hate each other and respect each other. . . . . .