The Strategist

Life is not long, don't be disappointed! May you try your best! Carp leaps over the dragon gate!

I am a novice, and I came across this book by chance. The writing is a bit green, but I can tell that the author is still writing it with great care. After reading a few chapters, the setting is quite novel and does not follow the flow. It makes me feel bright. Come on, author, I think highly of you

Bringing the conspiracy to life

Wow! Great writing! Why not put it on the shelves?

Well, I'm bored when I'm idle. Let me give you some advice. It just feels pretty basic, right? ! Chapter 85 starts with the Jun family and then goes directly to Qingyu. I personally feel that here we should add some descriptions from far to near, including the appearance of the characters, some layout of the places where the characters are, and the positions of the characters, instead of cutting directly to Qingyu. If it were like this in the later stage, it would be okay, but now the plot has not been released, and we don't understand these things, so we can add a little introduction between the lines. The personalities of some characters can be more prominent, and the supporting characters should also have IQs, etc.

In fact, this book has been a little boring from the beginning to now. War is rarely seen by people. There is nothing interesting at the beginning of the article. For example, for me personally, when I read the title and introduction of a novel and have some interesting points to read, I usually read a few chapters, and if I still feel bored, I stop reading. In addition, the protagonist is too weak. Although there are currently hints of transcending the ability to stop the gods, it is indeed weak. The routine of going from waste to strong man was possible a few years ago, but now it is difficult without the support of content and writing. As I said before, the content is a bit boring and confusing [maybe it's because I felt a bit bored and read it too quickly and didn't understand clearly]. I still don't understand the specific use of the source pattern. There are also some divine craftsmen, grand formation masters, etc., And the divisions are not clear. The subject matter is not novel, the content is not brilliant, and the writing style is clear to the author. There is no such thing as women [this may be my personal preference]. Not to mention Qingyu's appearance, I know nothing more than that she is a beauty. Many people read novels for the pleasure of reading. The protagonist is so good and is always being fucked, which makes it depressing. Is there a woman to adjust the novel, which makes it even more depressing, and with the addition of a man, it is even more depressing. The above is purely a personal opinion. I don't know whether it is correct or not. That's what I think.

I've read Chapter 25 and it feels pretty good. I just want to ask if there are any spoilers. Is Concubine Lan's only woman Qingyu? Hmm, can a woman only have her name written on the destiny catalog? In fact, it is recommended that you write about some feelings, emotions, and psychological changes, which will make it more comfortable to read. Finally, cheers

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Visit from "Esgaia World", the world's war has just begun, the test of blood and fire will never end, the world is not destroyed, and the battle continues

Brother Chengfeng doesn't need to care too much about the current number of clicks. The readership of Zongheng is too small and they are all concentrated on the great ones. It is difficult for new books to get ahead. Brother Chengfeng signed the contract relatively late. He had no recommendation position and did not run small advertisements himself. Naturally, the number of clicks was less. This cannot reflect the quality of the manual. The fantasy recommendation space resources are very tight, and the word count requirements are relatively high. Brother Chengfeng can put it on the shelves first, and find more friends to subscribe to each other. If you have a basic number of subscriptions and a relatively high word count, it will be easier to get recommendations. Of course, Brother Chengfeng can also drag it up to 50w. Be sure to put it on the shelves when it is put on the shelves. See if you can get it one or two more times before it is put on the shelves.