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Alas, Liudao, could you stop writing in such a frustrating way? Is there any trace of excitement in this novel? The villain (in my mind, Wuer is also a villain) can repeatedly jump in front of the protagonist, but the male protagonist cannot fly at all and is always suppressed. In this situation, even if he finally gets revenge, there will be no sense of satisfaction. In this case, I don't need the label of "Shuangwen". You are not very good at first suppressing and then promoting. Originally, I really admired these two supporting female characters. One is heroic, the other dares to fight, and has the style of a heroine. I hope they will appear in the future and have some better interactions with the male protagonist. However, now it is completely disabled, and it is physically and mentally disabled, which is uncomfortable. When Xiaoqueer asked if we could meet again, I thought it was setting the stage for the appearance of these two people in the future. I didn't expect that this would be the case when we meet again. I think this is one of the most frustrating plot situations. I was saved the first time but not the second time. I don't know what other people think, but that's how I feel.
A little advice for you guys
I think there should be a certain punishment for those who dare to harm the protagonist, otherwise it would be too frustrating to watch. In Kendo Tongshen, people often point at the protagonist's nose and yell at the protagonist, and it makes the protagonist indifferent. The protagonist should be more domineering, at least slap him in the face with a sword, or kill the protagonist for trivial things. This is a halo of ridicule and wisdom. However, the protagonist lets it go lightly. I think it is best to flesh out the villain as well. There should be some who want to kill the protagonist, some who have some minor conflicts and want to teach the protagonist a lesson, and some who just want to learn from each other. The ending of the villain can also be fleshed out. We can't guess that he will die as soon as the villain comes out. This will easily lead to aesthetic fatigue. Moreover, every enemy will eventually develop into a life-or-death enemy because of a trivial matter. It is also depressing to watch. It makes people feel that the whole world is against the protagonist. If there are too many, it will make people unhappy. The protagonist You should have your own personality charm and your own supporters. This is the reason why the loser protagonist is hated by readers now. No matter how strong the protagonist is, he cannot be recognized or respected by others. This is unreasonable and depressing. The onlookers should also have their own unique voice. They can't all slander and belittle the protagonist. The protagonist should also have supporters. After all, the enemy of the protagonist is not everyone. I like them all. There are villains who are beaten by the protagonist and then retaliate. There should also be villains who are beaten by the protagonist and are too frightened to dare to make trouble again. They are scared out of their wits and are beaten into younger brothers. They can't all fight against the protagonist. This is too templated. The most important thing is that the protagonist must be domineering. He will cut you if you dare to act blindly. Even if he can't kill, he will slap his sword in the face. Jianjian Super God is doing very well so far. I hope it can keep up!
This is definitely not scary But have prostatitis
Did it also reveal that Liu Dao also likes people with big breasts?
It's not okay to help others support their wives.
I always feel inexplicably frustrated watching it!
It's not like just killing someone with a sword will make you happy. The protagonist of this book is obviously very talented and has a bad background, but it just makes me feel aggrieved. He is still being bullied by some who are good and not good. In the latest chapter, the woman bullies the protagonist like this and doesn't care about her senior brother. She just slaps him out. How can there be so much bullshit! As for the goal that the protagonist needs this woman? What else is so rubbish? Just these people in one department? This is why monthly tickets drop so quickly!
You're a bad old man, you're very bad.
So here comes the question, why should I increase the price? You will be able to correct your reputation anyway.
If you get a public name in the future, the princess will also be in your pocket. You can also take a peek at the high throne
Support the old god
The only one who has written a book together is still persisting!