A disciple of the first generation of the Haotian Sect, the "brother" of the founder of the Haotian Sect, the uncle of everyone in the Haotian Sect, an old monster who has lived for ten thousand years, the most handsome man in the world during the strongest Qi refining period in history.
Su Fan finally came out of seclusion.
As an astonishing genius who was about to overcome the tribulation during the Qi refining period, in order to survive his twelfth thunder tribulation, Su Fan decided to go out to search for heavenly materials and earthly treasures to prepare for the tribulation and attack the twelfth level of the Qi refining period.
The result...
Su Fan: I just want to survive the disaster. Can you please stop messing with me?
When it reaches 1000 chapters, you don't need to read it anymore. They are two completely unrelated books. It's okay to see from the front. I really can't read the rest of it. If I change the author, I might find a writer instead.
If the shooter changes in the middle, you can just abandon it.
Give up when it reaches 400
At the end, a heroine suddenly appeared who really didn't understand the previous emotions and had no foreshadowing. It was obvious that the Li family had deceived him, so why did they suddenly turn that woman into the heroine? What did this mean? She blocked the spell and became the heroine. This heroine should be written as Liu Ling. Author, the way you write is really out of the ordinary. It really doesn't look good, okay? Moreover, as you write this novel, you write at the front that Su Fan has lived for 10,000 years. How can he be so weak? Why do you have white marks and vomiting blood on his body? Is 10,000 years really that weak? The writing is so powerful. What we want to read are all cool articles. This kind of mindless article looks fine at first, but becomes increasingly illogical and abrupt later on. If you wrote about Li Qingzhu, why did you write out the six spirits? There is also a chapter written as if he is afraid of the six spirits. It's written like a strict wife. And the plot is always topsy-turvy.
It's common for writers to be poor. This is the first time I've seen such a poor writer. They're all trying to fill in the gaps and only focus on the word count.
It's a perfect plot from the beginning, but this is what it looks like from the end
It was normal before Chapter 140, but after that it gave me an inexplicable feeling. The relationship line is so inexplicable that I don't know where the good feeling comes from... Why did I suddenly fall in love with it? ?
I just can't understand it. It's weird. The more I look at it, the less I understand.
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The first hundred chapters are very interesting, but the rest of it is messed up. I don't know why. Writing a book is not easy, and screenwriting is even more difficult. Hey, it's so hard to find a good book!
When it reaches 1000 chapters, you don't need to read it anymore. They are two completely unrelated books. It's okay to see from the front. I really can't read the rest of it. If I change the author, I might find a writer instead.
If the shooter changes in the middle, you can just abandon it.
Give up when it reaches 400
At the end, a heroine suddenly appeared who really didn't understand the previous emotions and had no foreshadowing. It was obvious that the Li family had deceived him, so why did they suddenly turn that woman into the heroine? What did this mean? She blocked the spell and became the heroine. This heroine should be written as Liu Ling. Author, the way you write is really out of the ordinary. It really doesn't look good, okay? Moreover, as you write this novel, you write at the front that Su Fan has lived for 10,000 years. How can he be so weak? Why do you have white marks and vomiting blood on his body? Is 10,000 years really that weak? The writing is so powerful. What we want to read are all cool articles. This kind of mindless article looks fine at first, but becomes increasingly illogical and abrupt later on. If you wrote about Li Qingzhu, why did you write out the six spirits? There is also a chapter written as if he is afraid of the six spirits. It's written like a strict wife. And the plot is always topsy-turvy.
It's common for writers to be poor. This is the first time I've seen such a poor writer. They're all trying to fill in the gaps and only focus on the word count.
It's a perfect plot from the beginning, but this is what it looks like from the end
It was normal before Chapter 140, but after that it gave me an inexplicable feeling. The relationship line is so inexplicable that I don't know where the good feeling comes from... Why did I suddenly fall in love with it? ?
I just can't understand it. It's weird. The more I look at it, the less I understand.
Linked to the comments here
The first hundred chapters are very interesting, but the rest of it is messed up. I don't know why. Writing a book is not easy, and screenwriting is even more difficult. Hey, it's so hard to find a good book!