The History of Infatuated Struggle

Just write, write, crawl over here to show you, at any rate I want to be the first reader, I am worried to death. Why have you changed so much at the beginning? You have lost your original character. I like the original beginning, it is amazing. This name is a bit vulgar, forget it, you just like to use different methods to come up with some tricks. Have you gone too far in playing games and reading books? Write a hot-blooded female novel, with lots of clever ideas. Looking at such a woman, you are so MAN. I hope you will write a book, and don't forget your translation ambition. Let me comment on the article for you. After all, I have been your book friend for more than ten years. Although we are so far apart now, it doesn't matter. How can space and time separate our love? Opening: Although the old version is a bit obscure and difficult to read, it is quite atmospheric and much better than the average female-speaking version. It may be a bit niche, so you deleted it. It really loses your personality. Please criticize it. After the revision, it is a bit thin. , Just look at the few shining points and make it work. If you want to write a book, write a good one. Don't follow the crowd. Remember, you are your real first reader. If you don't think it is good, don't throw it out. Revise and revise it frequently, and there will be a lot of typos. Text: The context is very clear. Anyway, your brain is always active. Sister, I saw several small materials that are not from the book you recommended to me. They are very good, powerful, currently used, and grafted very well. The writing is not bland, and it is not considered fast-food literature. But if you look at the details, it is quite exquisite. I finally learned a little bit of Xiao*'s aesthetic style. The description of the article is very vivid. In the deleted chapters, the protagonists appeared. They were so gorgeous. What a waste. They were deleted. Their personalities are also very distinct. Content: I want to say that I read the outline you gave me, a four-character sentence. Have you been crazy about reading ancient books recently? I'm waiting to see how you develop it and write it. Here comes the shortcoming. The biggest problem is that you make sure whether it is written for women or men. In terms of plot, most readers will not like the plot that you spin around. There are too many people on the scene, which makes it a headache. Looking at the framework in the later stage, I feel that it is too big. Don't impose your own thoughts on the readers, and be more delicate. After all, the romance is better to be more traditional. The pace is a bit slow, one scene is one chapter, it's the same as a kimchi drama. Isn't this life-threatening? There are no serious men after doing it for a long time. Well, my fingers are about to twitch again, so let's just say this.