Forced to Get Married Right from the Start

The introduction of bullet weapons in the gunfight scene is pretty good.

Too much inner narration and little content

You really should stop writing. There are so many narrations.

The opening chapter is not as eye-catching as usual novels, but the subsequent story is not so good!

I wrote it well before, but why did it suddenly fall apart?

The word "peculiar" is quite suitable.

It would take several pages to write something that can be summarized in one sentence. The author's ability to make up numbers is quite good. Hehe

Write novels, just write novels. Don't insert new energy vehicle advertisements. You'll be annoyed when you see new energy vehicles.

The male and female protagonists don't even have in-depth communication.

It's disgusting that this heroine is having sex with someone of the same sex