Fight Against Haotian

After reading the novel, I feel like I am dreaming back to my youth, but how can I live forever in my youth? I hope all of you who like "Fighting Against the Haotian" will appreciate it... The prologue has a flavor of the ancient west wind. One man has one sword, and one sword seals the throat of seven people. The scene of flames rising to the sky begins the story of Yun Yi, a boy who defies the will of heaven. Let me talk about the overall feeling first. I feel that I have read a lot of books. The novel gave me many different types of feelings. It has the feeling of fighting against poverty, the human rights flavor of Zhuxian, and the flavor of Lingjian Mountain. In the first three chapters, the contradictions and conflicts are caused. No nonsense. The wording and sentences of cause and effect logic are just right. This is worth learning. Let's talk about my personal experience. First of all, the contradiction lies in the battle for the spiritual bones of the protagonist Yun Yi. The best spiritual bones (looking at the entire continent, they are rare). Manually funny. ) As the beginning of the conflict, not only reflects the protagonist's talent, golden finger, but also makes the protagonist question the entire world view, and even the moral character of the existence of immortals. It is the spark of the first collision of ideas in the novel, Lin Mu's ridicule and greed, which are just the right foreshadowing to lead to the subsequent greater contradictions. However, it is only from Chapter 9 that the appearance and legends of the entire continent are described. Personally, I feel it is a bit slow... (Big light blow...) The appearance of the mysterious fairy sword Xuanyuan Yuxuan is the second wave of small climax, and the shame of being protected by a girl is the passion that makes Yun Yi want to strengthen it further; the trial of seven tanks of water in one day, Yu Zhen's malicious provocation, first suppressed and then increased, the refreshing points came out naturally, cleverly conceived, and really rare. But here are some small suggestions. The necessary preparations are there, but you need to quickly switch to the main plot. The current main plot is not clear yet. If it is just the protagonist's way to become stronger, it will be a little less interesting. You might as well decide on a small branch first, such as the three-year agreement between Douban and others. Short-term goals can make readers full of expectations. As expected, Chapter 20 finally ushered in the counterattack that he had longed for. Yu Zhen was severely humiliated by Yun Yi. What is contradiction and what is climax are vividly reflected here. However, I personally think that the climax does not necessarily have to be a fight scene. It is better to add a dialogue before the fight to make the atmosphere tense. After you are out of breath, it is more enjoyable to perform in a smooth and flowing manner, with a sense of twists and turns (a family opinion, a big light blow...) Another point is the side description, whether it is The sarcastic glances of others are also the inner reactions of different people. To be able to write an immersive picture, you don't have to have gorgeous writing and storytelling power. The writing must be in key places. The excitement should be in the plot that is expected, which is not as exciting as the unexpected and sudden excitement. When the plot is almost laid, the perspective should be turned back to the protagonist in time. Regardless of the identity of the protagonist, every word is passionate, every sentence is heroic, and the words are sharp, which bursts out the charm of the protagonist. The decisive battle of Hanying Jue (reminds me of Super Beast Arms... Hahaha) is the protagonist's killing move, which is a bit interesting. In general, I support great works and wait until the clouds clear and the moon will shine. Come on! Thanks! ! !

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All the links are intertwined, and the characters are created with flesh and blood, top notch!

Brother, don't cut it yet, sort out the outline, straighten out the plot, and revise the text. It's actually not bad, so don't give up!

The classic three-year appointment, go and practice quickly

Read daily, learn from the masters, and when you have nothing to do, you can come and sit and drink A cup of leisurely tea "The horizontal sword smiles to the sky"

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