The west wind passed by, and the yellow sand covered the heroes' bones, leaving only the heroes to write poems in sorrow.
The waves are gone, the winds of Qin and Han are gone, the glorious temples are all rotten wood.
I originally wanted to serve the country and secure the world, but I couldn't bear to be trapped in the world.
Not only did he abandon the green forest to join the army, but he also met the beautiful woman in the thatched cottage.
I tied my head and listened to the piano and told the story for the rest of my life, but I couldn't wake up from a dream.
Unexpectedly, thunder breaks out during the day, and the lingering fragrance cannot stop crying.
Jiangdong goes east, travelers go west, lonely geese fly, flowers fall.
The evil karma has not been cut off with a light sword, but the heavy hatred is hard to get rid of.
Carry a carved bow on your back and lift it to cut through the wind. One day, if you step on the Lingxiao Palace, you will definitely cut down the bright moon and shatter the stars!
The great chivalrous person serves the country and the people! The writing style of "The Yellow Sand Journey" is excellent. Gu Zixixi's writing style is somewhat biased towards the semi-classical style. Although it is historical and military, it has a strong martial arts atmosphere and a sense of Jianghu. It has a very heavy feeling. The overall writing style has a sense of ancient prose. There is a saying that it is not easy for an author to have such writing skills. The writing style is concise but not straightforward, there are clues to promote the plot, and there are foreshadowings for the characters to appear. The literary skills are evident.
Secondly, the creation of the characters is very successful. From the connection at the Wanhe Teahouse in the beginning to the ambush in Yujialing, it is really attractive. What makes me feel good as a reader is that the appearance of the protagonist Jiang Lan is extremely stunning and the character is very outstanding. Unlike the characters of most protagonists in online novels, in addition to being handsome, he is also "unsexy" (hahahaha, manually funny). This can leave a very deep impression, which makes many book fans sigh. Another one is Xiang Beichuan's image, which is also very distinct. The characters outlined by the plot and plot are very three-dimensional and vivid. This is also the biggest highlight in my opinion - the character outline technique, which is not just to use narration to describe the character's appearance and experience, but to gradually improve the character through the way the character makes decisions about things and the direction of the plot in the existing plot.
In Wind and Cloud in the Northwest, I saw the protagonist's hesitation and helplessness, abandoning the world and joining the army; drunkenly reciting poems, I saw the beauty under the hazy moonlight; traveling in search of people, I found the beauty Xun'er in the thatched house; the rivers and lakes are dangerous, and Xun'er died for no reason, which really makes me feel bad for the protagonist. The passionate resonance of the whole world; the sublimation of thoughts and the rule of the world. It means that the concept of great harmony comes naturally. It is originally a bright and angry horse on the road of youth growth, but in fact it is more sad and tears. The floating life is not as long as the young. I think it will be slowly and carefully savored later, and it will have a unique charm. As an excellent author, the story must not only be well written and moving, but also have control over the entire work, a sense of pattern, how the main and branch lines develop, the significance of the branch lines serving the main line, and how the protagonist's psychological role is sublimated. The writing style has already surprised me. Why not go to a higher level and portray the characters more delicately to make the characters more vivid? Emotional incitement does not only rely on words and appearance. Just like Xun'er, it can be set off by a few more exterior scenes, and the psychological description complements each other. Wouldn't it be more clever and amazing... The words of the whole family are greatly appreciated. Looking forward to the invasion of foreign enemies on the border behind, the treacherous situation above the temple, the exquisiteness of thoughts comes from life, which is higher than life, and we encourage each other. I have read the latest chapter, and I am still not satisfied with it. I am looking forward to the big update
Having said so much, I have scattered a bit and made a summary. "The Journey to the Yellow Sand" is different from the general invincible novels with pretentious protagonists. The protagonist's growth does not follow the ordinary mode of playing dungeons, fighting monsters and upgrading. There are no unnecessary characters, no black and white right and wrong, and no plot direction that can be seen at a glance. Follow Jiang Lan to participate in the situation step by step, which is very immersive. There is an indispensable connotation in it. The collision of ideological sparks, the unique protagonist Jiang Lan, what kind of sparks can occasionally emit, and how different the rivers and lakes will be from the routine novels, wait and see
Thank you
Thank you Gu Zixixi for your support and coming to visit with your 100-word long review!
First of all, let me explain that my feelings after watching this masterpiece are just my personal feelings. I hope that everyone who likes "Yellow Sand Journey" will give it a thumbs up...
First of all, it opens with a teahouse where people and snakes are mixed, and the details are well described (Yu Wanhe's abacus is so graphic), and the conflict between the protagonists Jiang Lan and Xiang Beichuan is well depicted. Both the fighting scenes and the verbal descriptions are full of the atmosphere of Jianghu. The encounter between the young master and Jiang Lan and the development of the plot are quite heavenly. Then comes the second collision with Xiang Beichuan, which gives a feeling of not knowing each other before. To be honest, until I reached Chapter 10, the characters were flesh and blood, but the descriptions were insufficient. The plot was coherent but complex. There were too many characters and the chain was complicated. I had to read the first three chapters on both sides over and over before I understood the ins and outs of the story and then continued reading.
As a world of historical military and hegemony, the beginning reflects a huge pattern, intricate stories, and conspiracy (the conspiracy has a bit of a jojo feel, hahahahaha), Beichuan Past Events, there is a very confusing feeling (maybe my sense of history is not very good, so as a first-time reader, I can't quite understand... …It's a big slap in the face.) The plot of Muzhongmoude is the same for the first time. It needs to be read through. I was confused before watching it, but I was applauded after watching it. The writing is really good, but when I watched it for the first time, the experience was not particularly good. Great works need to be sunny, but more people need to be able to appreciate both refined and popular tastes. (The realm of grand momentum like a rainbow is too high...)
The style is higher than the story itself, and the sense of expression is greater than the content. There are good and bad. It starts with Jianghu, and then returns to military history. The protagonist Jiang Lan gives me the feeling of a boy traveling in Jianghu first, and then the transition of a hero. The process is definitely exciting, and I can control it with great writing power. I look forward to it!
All in all, it has a strong sense of structure and originality in the story, making it a masterpiece!
Thanks! ! !
In the past, when he heard the old man's call, the young man would immediately get up from the bed and appear in front of him. Uncharacteristically, Gongtian lay motionless on the bed and continued to sleep soundly! ! !
Do you have a large readership? I would like to contact you if you have any questions. This is definitely a good thing.
The new book is released for the first time, support each other! Contaminate each other! Collected!
The glitz is like brocade, the light clouds are dancing, and the splendid future is shining.
A hero doesn't ask about his future, he just wants to fall into the middle of a book.
…Come and have a look…
The plot is full of twists and turns, and the writing is excellent. I'll read it every day, so keep it up! !
The drizzle falls continuously on the curtains, and the gentle breeze soothes my heart.
I don't care about worldly affairs and I am content with sleeping, just because of this article, I am happy with people's hearts.
…Wait
I feel the most relaxed when reading a book. I think the author's articles contain some kind of magic that makes people happy... I'm looking forward to the masterpiece!
Read a good book in the morning, good books wait for no one!
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The great chivalrous person serves the country and the people! The writing style of "The Yellow Sand Journey" is excellent. Gu Zixixi's writing style is somewhat biased towards the semi-classical style. Although it is historical and military, it has a strong martial arts atmosphere and a sense of Jianghu. It has a very heavy feeling. The overall writing style has a sense of ancient prose. There is a saying that it is not easy for an author to have such writing skills. The writing style is concise but not straightforward, there are clues to promote the plot, and there are foreshadowings for the characters to appear. The literary skills are evident. Secondly, the creation of the characters is very successful. From the connection at the Wanhe Teahouse in the beginning to the ambush in Yujialing, it is really attractive. What makes me feel good as a reader is that the appearance of the protagonist Jiang Lan is extremely stunning and the character is very outstanding. Unlike the characters of most protagonists in online novels, in addition to being handsome, he is also "unsexy" (hahahaha, manually funny). This can leave a very deep impression, which makes many book fans sigh. Another one is Xiang Beichuan's image, which is also very distinct. The characters outlined by the plot and plot are very three-dimensional and vivid. This is also the biggest highlight in my opinion - the character outline technique, which is not just to use narration to describe the character's appearance and experience, but to gradually improve the character through the way the character makes decisions about things and the direction of the plot in the existing plot. In Wind and Cloud in the Northwest, I saw the protagonist's hesitation and helplessness, abandoning the world and joining the army; drunkenly reciting poems, I saw the beauty under the hazy moonlight; traveling in search of people, I found the beauty Xun'er in the thatched house; the rivers and lakes are dangerous, and Xun'er died for no reason, which really makes me feel bad for the protagonist. The passionate resonance of the whole world; the sublimation of thoughts and the rule of the world. It means that the concept of great harmony comes naturally. It is originally a bright and angry horse on the road of youth growth, but in fact it is more sad and tears. The floating life is not as long as the young. I think it will be slowly and carefully savored later, and it will have a unique charm. As an excellent author, the story must not only be well written and moving, but also have control over the entire work, a sense of pattern, how the main and branch lines develop, the significance of the branch lines serving the main line, and how the protagonist's psychological role is sublimated. The writing style has already surprised me. Why not go to a higher level and portray the characters more delicately to make the characters more vivid? Emotional incitement does not only rely on words and appearance. Just like Xun'er, it can be set off by a few more exterior scenes, and the psychological description complements each other. Wouldn't it be more clever and amazing... The words of the whole family are greatly appreciated. Looking forward to the invasion of foreign enemies on the border behind, the treacherous situation above the temple, the exquisiteness of thoughts comes from life, which is higher than life, and we encourage each other. I have read the latest chapter, and I am still not satisfied with it. I am looking forward to the big update Having said so much, I have scattered a bit and made a summary. "The Journey to the Yellow Sand" is different from the general invincible novels with pretentious protagonists. The protagonist's growth does not follow the ordinary mode of playing dungeons, fighting monsters and upgrading. There are no unnecessary characters, no black and white right and wrong, and no plot direction that can be seen at a glance. Follow Jiang Lan to participate in the situation step by step, which is very immersive. There is an indispensable connotation in it. The collision of ideological sparks, the unique protagonist Jiang Lan, what kind of sparks can occasionally emit, and how different the rivers and lakes will be from the routine novels, wait and see Thank you
Thank you Gu Zixixi for your support and coming to visit with your 100-word long review!
First of all, let me explain that my feelings after watching this masterpiece are just my personal feelings. I hope that everyone who likes "Yellow Sand Journey" will give it a thumbs up... First of all, it opens with a teahouse where people and snakes are mixed, and the details are well described (Yu Wanhe's abacus is so graphic), and the conflict between the protagonists Jiang Lan and Xiang Beichuan is well depicted. Both the fighting scenes and the verbal descriptions are full of the atmosphere of Jianghu. The encounter between the young master and Jiang Lan and the development of the plot are quite heavenly. Then comes the second collision with Xiang Beichuan, which gives a feeling of not knowing each other before. To be honest, until I reached Chapter 10, the characters were flesh and blood, but the descriptions were insufficient. The plot was coherent but complex. There were too many characters and the chain was complicated. I had to read the first three chapters on both sides over and over before I understood the ins and outs of the story and then continued reading. As a world of historical military and hegemony, the beginning reflects a huge pattern, intricate stories, and conspiracy (the conspiracy has a bit of a jojo feel, hahahahaha), Beichuan Past Events, there is a very confusing feeling (maybe my sense of history is not very good, so as a first-time reader, I can't quite understand... …It's a big slap in the face.) The plot of Muzhongmoude is the same for the first time. It needs to be read through. I was confused before watching it, but I was applauded after watching it. The writing is really good, but when I watched it for the first time, the experience was not particularly good. Great works need to be sunny, but more people need to be able to appreciate both refined and popular tastes. (The realm of grand momentum like a rainbow is too high...) The style is higher than the story itself, and the sense of expression is greater than the content. There are good and bad. It starts with Jianghu, and then returns to military history. The protagonist Jiang Lan gives me the feeling of a boy traveling in Jianghu first, and then the transition of a hero. The process is definitely exciting, and I can control it with great writing power. I look forward to it! All in all, it has a strong sense of structure and originality in the story, making it a masterpiece! Thanks! ! !
In the past, when he heard the old man's call, the young man would immediately get up from the bed and appear in front of him. Uncharacteristically, Gongtian lay motionless on the bed and continued to sleep soundly! ! !
Do you have a large readership? I would like to contact you if you have any questions. This is definitely a good thing.
The new book is released for the first time, support each other! Contaminate each other! Collected!
The glitz is like brocade, the light clouds are dancing, and the splendid future is shining. A hero doesn't ask about his future, he just wants to fall into the middle of a book. …Come and have a look…
The plot is full of twists and turns, and the writing is excellent. I'll read it every day, so keep it up! !
The drizzle falls continuously on the curtains, and the gentle breeze soothes my heart. I don't care about worldly affairs and I am content with sleeping, just because of this article, I am happy with people's hearts. …Wait
I feel the most relaxed when reading a book. I think the author's articles contain some kind of magic that makes people happy... I'm looking forward to the masterpiece!
Read a good book in the morning, good books wait for no one!