Nine Demon Killing Sword

Regarding fighting, I have some suggestions for you (personal understanding). The main theme is oriental passionate novels, and the protagonist's level improvement is a major system. If you want to be unique and innovative in this type of novel, you can also reflect the strength and growth of Yeshang in terms of weapons. Let me give you an example, Dugu Qiufei in Jin Yong's novel. He used a sharp sword when he was young. In the second stage, he switched to a light sword. In the third stage, he switched to a heavy sword. Finally, he used a wooden sword. The wooden sword has no edge and cannot hurt anyone. However, this wooden sword is actually just a representative, indicating that he has reached the point where he can no longer use weapons. In other words, we can naturally see how high his level is. Just the changes in the weapons can highlight the growth of Dugu Qiubei. Without spending a lot of effort to write gorgeous sword moves, it can truly let us know how powerful this person is, and it also reflects a process of growth. Putting this point in a fantasy novel will give it a more martial arts flavor! Just a personal opinion, just take a look!

There is a sense of a generous death and a desperate blow...

The villain dies from talking too much and being mean-mouthed!

Good morning!

Happy weekend, constant support, reading

Could it be that Lao Xun has a great opportunity today...

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The days are long, go to bed early

1. If the title is not to save the number of words, Mao has never corrected it. This will make people feel perfunctory, so it is recommended to modify it; 2. Typos. I also have this. Anyway, please pay attention to it. This is a flaw and will hurt readers' appetite; 3. Your transition words are too scarce. Don't always use "onomatopoeia". I'm not used to this kind of one-word paragraph; 4. It's still a matter of transition. It needs to be read without any abruptness. Personally, I feel that when the previous sentence was still talking about something else, another person suddenly appears; 5. The character description is thin! Very thin! Can't stand. The character is not outstanding, the characteristics are not deepened, and there is no way to make people shine; 6. There is basically no scene description to highlight the environment and character. These things are necessary and necessary; 7. There are too many dialogues. Don't use dialogue to push the plot, but know how to tell it in a straightforward manner. Straight talk is not a bad thing, if used well it can get twice the result with half the effort; 8. It is recommended to describe the character's skills to give people a shocking feeling, otherwise it will appear too bland and not exciting; 9. Close to life, higher than life. Derived from life, unconventional. Don't blindly pursue refinement. There is nothing wrong with being a lowly person occasionally; 10. Sharpen your martial arts, or compete in a duel. Try to incorporate the character's psychology into it as much as possible, and also describe the martial arts methods and various performances after being struck. 11. Force is a manifestation of ability and needs to be set off. Rather than a simple display, there are thousands of ways to kill people, not just vomiting blood.

The fighting is very delicate and the characters are well-drawn. It would be even better if some scene descriptions were added to enhance the atmosphere! The support remains unchanged, come on!