Guzhou Xinghe

First of all, my feelings and experiences after reading the novel only represent my personal opinions. I hope that everyone who likes "The Lonely Boat Galaxy" will appreciate it... First of all, the description of the introduction won my heart: Xu An just wants to go to class, play games, brag, and flirt with girls. It took thirteen chapters to enter the main drama. The previous campus plot made me think that I was going to have a fun campus experience. I didn't expect to brake all of a sudden and enter the game world directly. I was a little confused (personal experience, a big light blow...). I felt that some of the characters, such as Xiaoli, Teacher Jiang, and Fatty were a bit rough. There were no characters. The appearance, profile, and location description of the characters were missing, and they felt not three-dimensional and vivid enough. However, the overall setting of the story is quite novel, and it does have a fresh feeling, praise, praise, praise! ! ! ! ! But the tone doesn't have a tense and exciting atmosphere at first, but it has a sense of daily routine (if it's wrong, just spray it lightly...) Back to the story, the prelude after the protagonist Xu An enters the game is a bit like the novel Sword Art Online... Also, Lao Gao's character setting is somewhat successful and successfully sells the protagonist, but it is a little abrupt. If the game world is very real, then the protagonist's subconscious reaction when encountering the pig demon should be fear and horror. If you want readers to feel the terror of the pig demon, you should rely on the protagonist's psychology and the environment. If it's just a game, so it's not that scary, then this game seems to be... You can refer to the description of the character's psychology in the Sword Art Online novel, and it feels quite right. However, as for the intersection of the author's main plot and branch plot (the main plot is the game world, and the branch plot is the campus? Personal understanding, I'm sorry...), It is obvious to all, and the writing is indeed very good, praise it! ! ! In general, the author's writing and plot are of high quality, the settings of the psychic and the flying beast are novel, and the protagonist's character is appropriate. It is undoubtedly a masterpiece! Thanks! ! !

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