The Tower of the Sky

Continuing to read on from the previous feelings, the little pk between the tutor and Xiao Ning in Chapter 37 was also a bit fun, but to be honest (if there is anything wrong, please feel free to comment...) I just felt that it was a bit too open-minded. Although the eloquence and fluent answers can be considered one of the cool points, the questions answered were beyond the scope, and I could still answer them, and they were all correct. Not to mention the level of the tutor, looking at it this way, I felt a little bit down (small comment... Personal feelings...). First of all, when Xiao Yan challenged Tutor Ruolin in Dou Po, it was not like this. He also used all his power, which not only reflected the tutor's level, but also managed the cool points just right. It is understandable that the tutor tried every means to make things difficult, but treating this as a small wish would be disrespectful... Xiao Ning's humble refusal can be added to the tutor's blessing after he was relieved, which can better reflect the charm of the protagonist (if there is anything wrong, please lightly complain...) There are still some deficiencies in the description of appearance and location (manually save your life...) From the perspective of the plot, the degree of control is appropriate, the rhythm is orderly, and the battle scenes are appropriately accelerated. Whether it is overcoming difficulties or practicing in seclusion, it reflects Xiao Ning's personal charm from the side, especially the duel between Xiao Ning and Chu Chaojian in the blockade, and Xiaoying's The side effects all cast a faint layer of confusion on this battle. The end of Chapter 45 left a suspense, but it immediately reflected the gathering of Xiao Ning's spiritual energy. I think we can end this chapter with the final struggle and start the next chapter with a twist. One sword turns nine, and I think the nine-nine-eighty-one sword is much more handsome than Xiao Ning's golden sword... (Manual funny~~) In general, the details are well described, the battle pattern is clear, the twists and turns are really exciting, and the sword moves are also quite unique! ! ! (Checking in, I saw Chapter 51~~Please keep updating~~~) Thank you! ! !

Wow, this is so wonderfully written! Come on

The writing is smooth, the characters are vivid, and the plot is full of ups and downs.

This data. . . He's a big shot! Why have you stopped updating?

Problems cannot be solved without taking action

I see that the length has finally become longer here. Although the previous one is not short, it is not too long. The reading experience is slightly worse. Generally speaking, it feels good. It's just that the fighting in some parts does not feel that smooth and refreshing. In addition, I feel that the descriptions in other aspects are quite good. It's just that I may have read too many books by great masters and feel that the writing is lacking. But I believe that the writing behind the stone will definitely get better and better. Come on.

Happy Mid-Autumn Festival and National Day from Stone

Support my old friend, keep writing and don't give up, the future is promising! I miss you. Come take a look. Xiaomi is always here (ง •̀o•́)ง

5.21 Grape comes to express love again Wandering when someone cares about you is not called wandering, crying when someone is with you is not called sadness, the feeling that someone cherishes is called true love, and the joy that someone shares is called happiness. May you not be sad, have true love, and be happy. Only by never forgetting your original intention can you always succeed!

Happy 520, don't open a new book, just keep writing.