Lord of the Immortal Emperor

After reading the masterpiece, I have some feelings. It is purely a personal feeling. Everyone who likes "Lord of the Immortal Emperors" is encouraged... Let's talk about the beginning of Luo Yu City. Contradictions arise due to the account book conspiracy. The first main plot of the male protagonist Yan Jingchen also kicks off with the death of Yan Tiesheng. The pace is fast and the protagonist's way of cultivating immortality is introduced without any delay. It can be said that it goes smoothly and naturally. It can be seen that Da Da's control of the main plot is really excellent. The courage and determination to cultivate immortality with the village chief and fight against the demon wolf can be seen in Yan Jingchen's character. The torture of the entire world also started from the initial conflict. Later, as the story progressed, the level increased, and the thinking about the world gradually matured. The final election of the Immortal Emperor City entered the next wave of high-level competition. Chao, but Yan Jingchen cheated all the way when he was just starting out. Although it was very satisfying, he always couldn't help but think about the rigor behind it. Until Chapter 13, the fight between Baili Mo and Yan Jingchen at the beginning was a bit fast. At first, I thought it was a long-term main plot. I didn't expect that they would fight so soon, which was a bit unexpected. Heroes emerge from youth, and the death battle process in the Immortal Emperor City is very exciting. It can be seen that Da Da Da is really experienced in fighting, and the writing of Breaking the Sky is very distinctive. Furthermore, I thought that the protagonist would be seriously injured, but I didn't expect that the protagonist would grow up so fast. It was quite refreshing, but the pace felt a bit faster. After the revenge, there is a tense capture-the-flag battle, but the description is a bit sparse. I could write a few more interesting chapters of this kind (personal experience, big fan...) Jiang Ai's trial describes the protagonist's genius from the side, and also well foreshadows the subsequent plot. The Thousand-foot Diving is also quite innovative. I personally thought that I could add some small banter or some laughter, so that I could smile at ease even when I was nervous, and then transition to the next plot. For example, Lu Shengren is a strict henwife, which is very lovable and interesting. In general, the layout is huge, the hierarchy is ingenious, the protagonist's sublimation of mood is thought-provoking, and there are some routines in the plot (big light blow...) But the original work behind it is really fresh, and I support it greatly! Thanks!!!

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