Nine-Section Sword

Following the previous evaluation chapter, with the perspective of the protagonist Yue Fengyang, we shift to the elixir chapter that we love to see. The master of alchemy, Mo Yan, becomes the master and begins a new chapter of alchemy. This aspect is quite fantasy. The characters are brought together by their emotions. Since he is good at swordsmanship, he has a bit of a chivalrous flavor. Since there is a chivalrous person, he must be chivalrous. On this point, I think it can be described more. Although it is a fantasy continent, if you want to be original and give people a sense of freshness, I personally think that you can add the chivalrous spirit that is missing in fantasy and fantasy. With this chivalrous spirit, heroism, and spirit that runs through ancient and modern times, the pre-modern world and the real situation of post-enlightenment, maybe you can add a little more true temperament and a little more talent in the fantasy and fantasy that is full of formulas. It is true that "Nine-Part Sword" has created a continent that is passionate about the practice of swordsmanship, which is inseparable from elixirs and upgrades. The formulas in the thirty-seven chapters are quite a bit like the ritual magic of light novels. Although there are sometimes witty words, great talent cannot be limited to this. In addition, the entire macro structure requires three elements to construct: world, hero, and destiny. Why do I say this? I feel that the pace of the novel is a bit slow. Of course, there is no problem with the large writing style and strong writing power. However, as a reader, it feels a bit slower. It is not the pace of each story's upgrade, but the pace of the plot. In general, the plot is full of ups and downs, and the chapters about the trial are quite exciting. The adventures that follow, Mo Yan's upper body, and the chapter fifty-six when he becomes an alchemist are all written smoothly. There are several first-class works for readers of different grades. As a work that wants to become a god, I am even more looking forward to the amazing passages in the big article. The subsequent plot will definitely be more exciting. Readers are eagerly looking forward to and calling for the "peak"! ! ! One family's opinion, for reference only, please give me a thumbs up... Thank you! ! !

Written at the front: A thousand readers will have a thousand opinions. Everyone has a different opinion. The following is just my personal opinion. I hope that everyone who likes "Nine Sections of the Sword" will give it a thumbs up... The young man wields a sword and has superb nine-level sword skills; The hairpin in her skirt is holding an umbrella, and the nephrite jade is warm and fragrant with a faint smile. "Nine Stages of Sword" creates a continent that is passionate about the practice of swordsmanship. Spiritual swords are a special existence in this continent. The young man was originally a man in the dust, but God gave his spiritual sword the name Mo Yan. The spiritual sword cuts through the fog and embarks on a journey of inquiry. From this point of view, it is very innovative and has the flavor of shouldering the bright moon and blooming sunflowers. From a creative point of view, the novel's spiritual sword is a natural one. The novel "Nine-Part Sword" is a standard latecomer and not a representative of the first echelon. However, how to write different fireworks under the same routine requires the author to define the beginning of the novel in an unconventional way. In terms of pioneering work, the hierarchical system of swordsmanship at the beginning is divided into nine levels, and the nine levels are divided into three realms. This is divided into advantages and disadvantages. The advantage is that it is full of heroic and fantasy continental atmosphere, but there is a slight disadvantage in that it is too complicated and can be swept away (this is just a personal Experience, lightly spray...), There are also nine levels of inner alchemy, and the nine levels are divided into junior high school and high school, a total of 27 realms. From this look, it seems to be a million-dollar masterpiece (I look forward to millions of people becoming gods), and the future is promising. From the perspective of writing style, there are eight words: the pen is connected with nature, and the pen is flowing. The description of the girl Liu Beier's appearance, hair bun with black hair, white skirt and jade belt, etc. Is professional. The pattern continues to expand with the protagonist's upgrade and adventure. I hope the author has an overview in mind and writes about the world in his heart like splashing ink. After all, there are always too many ties and it is impossible to write a single line of human love. This is the love line I look forward to writing in DaDa. This is an unconventional novel... Wouldn't it be wonderful to not only have the passionate joy of young people, but also to have the love, hate and hatred that are constantly being sorted out and confused as a branch line? (A little personal suggestion... Please spray it lightly) Finally, I hope that your great works will sail across the sea!

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