The Concubine-Born Daughter’s Bid for Power

I really like this cover made by the website (◦˙▽˙◦)

Congratulations on the completion of Nine Lives~ The Concubine is a book that I like very much. I haven't read it for a long time but I have been thinking about it. To be honest, I didn't have time before. But now some people dare not look at it. I read the chapter about Ah Ba, and now I feel depressed. Ah Chang is the white moonlight, and I think the book Concubine is the same for me. I'm super looking forward to my baby's new book~

Because chapters cannot be modified, let me explain the reason here. Fu'an, Yanhua and Yi Xuan have all revealed that the prince does not just keep the heroine by his side just to let her be a secret guard and do some small things for him. The prince's expectations for the heroine are much higher than ordinary people, but the heroine is a novice who knows nothing. She thinks that if the prince wants to find someone who can entrust him with important tasks and help him ascend the throne smoothly, it will definitely not be her. But since he has chosen her, it must not only be as simple as ascending the throne, but also has another purpose, a purpose that only the heroine can help him achieve. What the heroine is now wondering is what this purpose is.

Wow, it's coming, it's coming, boss.

Congratulations on the completion of Nine Lives! Clicking on the ending chapter, I don't know how Jiu Sheng felt about ending this novel. Seeing that the mother-in-law Yi Zhu lost her beloved daughter, and that although she was the Queen Mother, there was a gap between her parents and her children. I felt sad and emotional, especially the first-person perspective. Zhu arrives and meets the prince, and the tone of the whole book has a sad tone, which makes me feel quite scared. I don't dare to read it because I am afraid that my favorite character will not die well and will be sad for a long time. Moreover, Jiu Sheng's ability to tell the story has to make people get involved. I hope more people can read this novel.

Xiao Peng Jiu Sheng, congratulations on the completion

In fact, the emperor still loves him very much. The emperor should always hope that he can become the best person in the world. He feels cold in that position. He only hopes that his son can be more careless and learn to put down his weaknesses to protect himself, but he has never thought about whether his son is willing to do this.

I feel that Song Yujun is really well protected in the Duke's Mansion. She has an extreme personality, but she is not smart enough. Sometimes hatred can kill others, and it may kill herself. Unfortunately, Song Yujun is the latter. Do you think she deserves it? It doesn't seem to be the case. If I were Song Yujun, I would also hate Yi Zhu, but she is too stubborn and always thinks that she is of a high rank. It's so miserable.

I can see that you want to express the protagonist's growth after experiencing difficulties from various characters, as well as the performance of different identities, etc. But I always feel that the protagonist lacks some motivations and the conflict seems unreasonable. She is trapped in a princeling trying to compete for the throne. Why should she try so hard to prove that she is competent? Maybe it's to survive, so the character's attitude must be expressed and what her true intentions are. You don't even love me, you are just a tool in the eyes of the prince, but you are a living person, you will fight for yourself, (it feels more like cultivating a robot) What does the protagonist think, rejection or acceptance, I think readers will want to see rejection more. If a person has no heart, then give her heart (for example, the prince gives it to her and then destroys it haha). If a person has no dreams, then he is just a salty fish. Let her have a motive (desire) for what she wants, and then deviate from her original intention. The prince makes you have to do something (obstacle), and then keep getting deeper and deeper, and finally what she chooses in her heart (action). The conflict in the story will be reasonable.

The conflict in the first paragraph is very intense. The heroine's hatred and cruelty actually have reasons. The death of her mother and brother, the cruelty of the mistress, the indifference of the father, and the condescension of the sister-in-law.