Daughter Gets Married

I worked hard to add a chapter today

Happy National Day and Mid-Autumn Festival Add one more chapter

Sister Lian, I won a lottery. I have a canvas bag. If any girls want it, leave it on WeChat and I will give it to you.

It's too long-winded. After taking revenge for so long, the enemy has nothing to do and keeps jumping around.

The plot is too long, and the relationship lines between the male and female protagonists are not very well written. I am really anxious about when we can get married!

Shouldn't a senior writer like you should have at least 3,000 words per chapter?

Many people say that the plot is too slow and procrastinating. In fact, I want to say that this is not a brainless novel. It only talks about pleasure and hatred without logic and rationality. Many things are not as easy as you think due to different status, and will be much more difficult. It is more reasonable to take revenge slowly and step by step. You cannot look at the problem from a God's perspective and feel that the protagonist is too weak.

It's a little bad at the beginning, but it's pretty good.

The plot is procrastinating and the main line is unclear

Who gave birth to Ji Yuanhai☺️☺️☺️