Yao Guangzhi

I've said it before, my thoughts after reading it only represent my personal opinions, everyone who likes "Yao Guang Zhi" can just comment... The first climax is in Chapter 13, and then the plot fluctuates from Chapter 34 to Chapter 340. From the gentle feeling at the beginning to the compact plot, there is a sense of gradual progress. This feeling is a bit similar to the slow-burning of Zhu Xian. I think the best part of this novel is not the setting of the world, or even the writing of the story (the male and female protagonists have their wedding ceremony in Chapter 42, and the child's spiritual roots are tested in Chapter 52. This... Seems too fast. I feel that the heroine has no three-dimensional impression before... It is already done). It is rare that it does not take the harem route. Although the protagonist's growth path is not said to be full of twists and turns and ups and downs, it is gradually getting better. As mentioned in the author's introduction, this is a record of cultivation civilization, which uncovers the appearance of gold and jade and reveals the hidden flaws. Then, the protagonist's continuous torture, the development of the world view, and the appearance of the golden jade of cultivation civilization through the mouths of the characters, create the first crack. Through the process of exploration, through the in-depth, we can see the hidden flaws. This clue is not clear (a small personal opinion, a big light...). The character traits of the protagonist can only be figured out slowly after completing the prologue. The scenes in the novel include a bit of a grand view garden-style sequence, but the main part still follows the protagonist's journey of upgrading and fighting monsters. The plot turns in chapters 60 and 70, and a series of events occur. The pace speeds up. After reading it, I can't help but let out a sigh of relief. Furthermore, if we want to constantly ask questions through the mouths of each character and constantly improve our understanding of the world of cultivation, then I think side descriptions or psychological descriptions are indispensable. Generally speaking, the character design of the protagonist Xu (Huai) Yi is quite good. Different from other routine online novels, it is not a dual spiritual root. It is confused and lost. It can resonate with thousands of us and is pushed forward. It is fate and the plot. The author needs to consider the world view more carefully in the angle he chooses. The emotion is always there, with blood and tears, and the rise of the family. It is a painstaking novel that takes a young person on a journey, with shadows of the passion for cultivation in the past! Thanks!

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