Hello everyone, my name is Mo Ying, and I am a killer by profession.
The boss on the surface is the head of the organization of Ji Xuan Kingdom, but my real Master is actually the author himself. It's just that I am ordered around by the evil author every day, and sometimes he deliberately cheats me. Although I have been treated well by him, I have the best spiritual training, the ultimate treasure, and the super beauty... (Author: This... Really~ no).
... Gan, now I just want to give the author a blow one day. Dear readers, if you want to see me poking fun at the author, please click and bookmark it. Don't listen to anything then, just put the smelly socks in his mouth, put a brick on his head first, fuck him until he is paralyzed, and then you have the final say with swords, guns and sticks, how about it? ? ?
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No matter what the reason is, I love my work and read "Mu Yulu". I beg you to come back for a return visit!
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Let me talk about the good aspects first. First of all, the vocabulary and description are good, and the connection between the front and back is relatively smooth. However, too much description in some places will make people feel impatient and lose the motivation to read on. Although there are still many areas for improvement, overall it is still worth reading. After all, different readers have different perceptions. This is just my opinion and is for reference only.
Hiss——
After reading a paragraph, my eyes were dazzled
Although the writing is good, it needs to be divided into paragraphs.
Smooth and natural, the writing is delicate, good, keep up the good work
The description is very accurate, Mr. Mobai.
The chapter begins with an exclamation, setting up suspense and foreshadowing the following, which is really the finishing touch.
Chapter 40: Encounter on a narrow road The author has something to say
(When I write this, I have already written more than 100,000 words. Dear readers who can see it here, Feixue would like to thank you all. After all, Feixue's writing of the previous two chapters is really not good, and it has been delayed for two days because Feixue's parents have begun to urge Feixue to find a job these days. I'm really confused these days. I don't know what to do or write. Feixue may not be able to update every day in the future, but I will definitely finish this book. After all, this is Feixue's first book! In the end, I wish all readers good health, eternal youth, and no worries!
No matter what the reason is, I love my work and read "Mu Yulu". I beg you to come back for a return visit!
Check in to support, it's getting better and better, cheers up
Support it
Come and bother me, everyone, read more big books, the more you read, the more addictive you will be.
Come before clocking in
Come on, rise up
Let me talk about the good aspects first. First of all, the vocabulary and description are good, and the connection between the front and back is relatively smooth. However, too much description in some places will make people feel impatient and lose the motivation to read on. Although there are still many areas for improvement, overall it is still worth reading. After all, different readers have different perceptions. This is just my opinion and is for reference only.
Hiss—— After reading a paragraph, my eyes were dazzled Although the writing is good, it needs to be divided into paragraphs.
Smooth and natural, the writing is delicate, good, keep up the good work
The description is very accurate, Mr. Mobai.
The chapter begins with an exclamation, setting up suspense and foreshadowing the following, which is really the finishing touch.
Chapter 40: Encounter on a narrow road The author has something to say
(When I write this, I have already written more than 100,000 words. Dear readers who can see it here, Feixue would like to thank you all. After all, Feixue's writing of the previous two chapters is really not good, and it has been delayed for two days because Feixue's parents have begun to urge Feixue to find a job these days. I'm really confused these days. I don't know what to do or write. Feixue may not be able to update every day in the future, but I will definitely finish this book. After all, this is Feixue's first book! In the end, I wish all readers good health, eternal youth, and no worries!