Holy Mark

Quietly, my character will appear soon.

Come on, always support your little cutie

Congratulations to the author for launching a new book. I hope this book will still have the same wonderful plot as the previous book, rather than being a boring novel.

Why haven't I discovered such a beautiful book earlier? I will definitely collect it and support it!

Personally speaking, this fantasy novel is very smooth to read. Although the twists and turns are still small, the whole plot develops very reasonably and is not abrupt. It is not like some novels where the protagonist is lucky enough to pick up things everywhere, or else behaves in a quaint way, which makes me tired of looking at it! In particular, the relationship was very natural, and there was no unreasonable and forced development such as "it feels very familiar at first glance". I really liked this encounter. The episode where he fought with the student council president was a good way to establish his abilities. Looking forward to future updates and stories! But there are a few things that I think can be improved, that is, the characteristics of each sacred pattern have not been introduced much, and may not have been written yet. It seems that the divine pattern is more powerful, the mountains and rivers and attributes are different, and the rest are stretched. I feel that if this is unstable, there will be an infinite increase in the flow. The core of the divine pattern turns into a holy pattern, and the holy pattern is divided into upper, middle and lower. I feel that fighting is still a bit monotonous. We can express the characteristics of similar attributes and the characteristics of mountains and rivers or the essence of powerful artifacts, the coordination of skills, and the cooperation of a team. Like the first Douluo of San Shao, everyone has relatively distinctive characteristics and abilities, rather than simply being powerful. I am not only talking about the 5-person team, but also the more powerful seniors and teachers. Witness is very well written. Also, although I don't know how you want to develop the protagonist's 7 emotions, it is very difficult to express. I look forward to the changes brought about by each maze in the main line.

Author, please come on, okay?

Arrange? ?

Simply put, the hole was dug too quickly and not deep enough.

Hahaha I know the others are arrogance, jealousy, anger, laziness, greed, lust and gluttony (manual dog head) Looking forward to the follow-up development! If you return a visit and send a monthly pass or a reward, Yuntian will return you and read the masterpiece carefully and send a 100-word review.

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