I don't see you, but there are 41,301 people who left the city, and none of them returned.
Don't you see, thirty thousand armors, thirty thousand swords, and thirty thousand white-headed soldiers are all heading south to die.
Don't you see, there are three hundred Confucian scholars, writing loudly, wearing green shirts and wielding swords.
Don't you see, there are 50,000 households in Longcheng, all dressed in white, and I would also like to go with you.
Don't you see, there are ten thousand monks and soldiers, the Buddha is in the world with a fist in his heart, holding a butcher's knife and becoming a Buddha on the spot.
You don't see it, you don't see it, you haven't seen it before, you can't see it, you still don't want to see it, tell the mountain ghosts.
Change it, all proceeds from this book this month, all. All donated to Han Hong Charitable Foundation.
All book friends may wish to click on it and have a look.
As a new writer,
The word count is less than 160,000 words.
I always thought that the more than 200 hits on this book were all fake.
No one reads the novels I write.
See the clicks and collections every day,
It's really sad to have that feeling of despair that is all 0.
But I really want to thank all the book friends for their recommendations and monthly votes.
Thank you very much. You may have never left a message or spoken.
But it really gave me great confidence,
Let me know that my work is also viewed by others.
Thank you.
I have an ominous feeling when I see the recent chapter title
There will be no holiday on May Day, and updates will not stop in May.
My main business is catering, and I will work overtime on May Day, so I may be busier than before.
But the updates will not stop, and I don't plan to take time off this month.
In the near future, the word count will reach 300,000 and it will be released.
Dear book friends, please give me some recommendation votes and monthly votes. Thank you.
I'm from the platoon brother group, come on.
As title
Oh, Shaolong Yuli, I have this pair of cps locked! ! !
Thanks to "The King of Swordsman" for supporting me. I am also a dream chaser and I share my thoughts...
I have just read the previous twenty chapters. Overall, the first chapter impressed me the most. The author concentrated on how to activate more convincing details to make the characters more three-dimensional. Not only is the wording and sentence creation meticulous (for example, in the first sentence of the chapter, "Don't you see, the blood souls with thirty thousand white helmets, go south to die and look for the northern city. There are also three thousand light cavalry, etc."), They are all using poems to create their own original creations. The opening scene of Jiangnan is desolate and bleak, with 30,000 swords unsheathed and fighting on the battlefield. A few understated verses vividly describe the brutality and grandeur of the battlefield, which can be seen in his writing style.
The relationship between Tang Liu and Bai Xiao is the most touching in "Five Heavens Immortals 1", and the happy ending redefines the whole scene. The writing is concise, but at the same time I also feel that there are some shortcomings (just take a look at it). The stories of each supporting character are piled up, and the impression of the protagonist is further weakened. The long-term layout, but there is no obvious description of the entire pattern and framework, writing from small to large, short The splendor of the storyline cannot make up for the weakness of the long-term storyline. Qinglian Taoist, the little Taoist boy on the back of a green bull, has a bit of the shadow of "In the Snow" (if you haven't seen it, you can go and see it, the writing style is somewhat similar to that of DaDa) The Son of Human Slaughter, a bit like Xu Xiao...
In general, Da Da's writing style is obvious to all. Not only the flexible use of original poems but also the subtlety of words and sentences are refreshing. However, the description of the appearance, psychological description and three views of the characters are a bit lacking. In short, the plot tension of the work is not enough. The storm in the rivers and lakes is broad and deep. If it is not explained, the novel has a slightly higher threshold, more martial arts, but less fairy spirit (big light spray...). The author is able to lay out the one-volume layout of Bai Xiao's travels in the world very well, but it is difficult to summarize the general trend of the world and describe the current situation. The analysis of the situation is only a few words, but the writing is easy to understand and unconventional. There is no deviating from the plot, and there are no unexpected opportunities from the sky. The real progress is always well-founded and admired.
But no matter what, "The King of Swordsman" is a good book that can be read once and for all.
Thank you, we are all dreamers and encourage each other.
Congratulations to the owner of the dog group for officially signing the contract
A monthly vote for feeding
The key points are circled and tested.
Dear friends and fans. This is my first time writing a novel, and it is not perfect in many places. Friends who really like to watch, you can add me at qq1498382485.
If there are enough people, I will create a fan base.
The first 5 friends who add me will become the first managers in the group.
And the characters in the book will be customized for you. (After all, the world is very big, so creating five more characters is still a big deal.)
Of course, you can also just chat, paddle in the water,
To cry out injustice for the world, to fight injustice for peace
Basically the basic team of the protagonist group has appeared. The next chapters may be a bit scattered.
The focus will be on the personality changes of each character, and the vision will be brighter, not just limited to Dongmitianzhou.
I hope you can like it more, collect it, click it, and recommend it.
Friends who have any opinions can also leave a message directly below this book, and I will modify it as appropriate.
Change it, all proceeds from this book this month, all. All donated to Han Hong Charitable Foundation.
All book friends may wish to click on it and have a look.
As a new writer, The word count is less than 160,000 words. I always thought that the more than 200 hits on this book were all fake. No one reads the novels I write. See the clicks and collections every day, It's really sad to have that feeling of despair that is all 0. But I really want to thank all the book friends for their recommendations and monthly votes. Thank you very much. You may have never left a message or spoken. But it really gave me great confidence, Let me know that my work is also viewed by others. Thank you.
I have an ominous feeling when I see the recent chapter title
There will be no holiday on May Day, and updates will not stop in May.
My main business is catering, and I will work overtime on May Day, so I may be busier than before. But the updates will not stop, and I don't plan to take time off this month. In the near future, the word count will reach 300,000 and it will be released. Dear book friends, please give me some recommendation votes and monthly votes. Thank you.
I'm from the platoon brother group, come on.
As title
Oh, Shaolong Yuli, I have this pair of cps locked! ! !
Thanks to "The King of Swordsman" for supporting me. I am also a dream chaser and I share my thoughts...
I have just read the previous twenty chapters. Overall, the first chapter impressed me the most. The author concentrated on how to activate more convincing details to make the characters more three-dimensional. Not only is the wording and sentence creation meticulous (for example, in the first sentence of the chapter, "Don't you see, the blood souls with thirty thousand white helmets, go south to die and look for the northern city. There are also three thousand light cavalry, etc."), They are all using poems to create their own original creations. The opening scene of Jiangnan is desolate and bleak, with 30,000 swords unsheathed and fighting on the battlefield. A few understated verses vividly describe the brutality and grandeur of the battlefield, which can be seen in his writing style. The relationship between Tang Liu and Bai Xiao is the most touching in "Five Heavens Immortals 1", and the happy ending redefines the whole scene. The writing is concise, but at the same time I also feel that there are some shortcomings (just take a look at it). The stories of each supporting character are piled up, and the impression of the protagonist is further weakened. The long-term layout, but there is no obvious description of the entire pattern and framework, writing from small to large, short The splendor of the storyline cannot make up for the weakness of the long-term storyline. Qinglian Taoist, the little Taoist boy on the back of a green bull, has a bit of the shadow of "In the Snow" (if you haven't seen it, you can go and see it, the writing style is somewhat similar to that of DaDa) The Son of Human Slaughter, a bit like Xu Xiao... In general, Da Da's writing style is obvious to all. Not only the flexible use of original poems but also the subtlety of words and sentences are refreshing. However, the description of the appearance, psychological description and three views of the characters are a bit lacking. In short, the plot tension of the work is not enough. The storm in the rivers and lakes is broad and deep. If it is not explained, the novel has a slightly higher threshold, more martial arts, but less fairy spirit (big light spray...). The author is able to lay out the one-volume layout of Bai Xiao's travels in the world very well, but it is difficult to summarize the general trend of the world and describe the current situation. The analysis of the situation is only a few words, but the writing is easy to understand and unconventional. There is no deviating from the plot, and there are no unexpected opportunities from the sky. The real progress is always well-founded and admired. But no matter what, "The King of Swordsman" is a good book that can be read once and for all. Thank you, we are all dreamers and encourage each other.
Congratulations to the owner of the dog group for officially signing the contract
A monthly vote for feeding
The key points are circled and tested.
Dear friends and fans. This is my first time writing a novel, and it is not perfect in many places. Friends who really like to watch, you can add me at qq1498382485. If there are enough people, I will create a fan base. The first 5 friends who add me will become the first managers in the group. And the characters in the book will be customized for you. (After all, the world is very big, so creating five more characters is still a big deal.) Of course, you can also just chat, paddle in the water,
To cry out injustice for the world, to fight injustice for peace
Basically the basic team of the protagonist group has appeared. The next chapters may be a bit scattered. The focus will be on the personality changes of each character, and the vision will be brighter, not just limited to Dongmitianzhou. I hope you can like it more, collect it, click it, and recommend it. Friends who have any opinions can also leave a message directly below this book, and I will modify it as appropriate.