Super Ultra Biography

I come from Tomato to officially support the author, although I'm still using the novice gift pack haha

If you want to refuse, just kill all hope, such as saying bad words, directly saying don't fucking bother me, I can't like you, get out as far as you can, so that you can directly make people give up, instead of like now, you can either talk or let her get out. What kind of cerebral palsy behavior is this? Something wrong? Really, this plot is the biggest failure of a book. What kind of nondescript writing is this? Either write it to death, or don't write it at all.

The author can be said to have restored Xiao Nai's TV very well and the main plot is close to the original case, but not like the original case where everyone died. I strongly support it~

Is the author considering a new book?

How did he know it wasn't a hallucination?

It's to my liking, but it's a lot of poison. Why didn't I come across this novel a few years ago? I might have been able to read it then. The character of the protagonist has not been established, the plot is dragging, and the author is yandere and literary, making the protagonist look like a yandere as well. The character of the protagonist does not fit in with the family background that the author set for him. He is not mature, but at least he is stable. Sometimes his thinking pattern looks like that of a junior high school student, forcibly reducing his intelligence. There are also many common sense mistakes. Do you know what it means when a person has a fever of 41 degrees? It's life-threatening. I don't know if you just write 38 or 39 degrees. If you write such a high temperature, it looks like a little cold. The Luo sisters travel. The younger sister sits in a wheelchair and writes about the feeling of endangered species appearing on the street. How strange it is. There is almost no growth for the protagonist in the two hundred chapters. Basically, the protagonist appears at the scene - sees people being killed, gets angry, decides to kill the monster - transforms and is beaten by the monster, and then mentally thinks "Isn't it still possible?", And then the monster escapes. This cycle goes on for more than two hundred chapters, which is simply outrageous. And don't treat the readers as idiots. We understand. We don't need the protagonist's psychological activities to explain why this and why. Finally, the author must be yandere. You want to create a tragic and lonely hero character, but you cannot always rely on the plot to hurt the people around the protagonist to achieve this goal. The central idea and emotions must also keep up, otherwise you will be in this situation. I didn't see a lone heroic protagonist, I just saw the author who has been abusing the protagonist, abusing the protagonist for the sake of abusing the protagonist, and the literary youth is sick. Above

There are too few battle scenes and it doesn't matter. There are too many plots. I'm here to read Ultraman fan fiction, not urban literature.

It's very touching. It's relatively easier than TV, but the fighting scenes and other aspects are very good.

To be honest, it's so ordinary and too wordy.

Although there is a shortcoming, that is, Noah cannot crush Zaki at the beginning and is weak with him, but in order to adapt to the article, this arrangement is reasonable, otherwise Nai's fanfic will not be written. But the author's depiction of human nature is relatively good, including the helplessness and tangled psychology after gaining power, as well as the firm will to protect. The biggest feature should be the psychological growth of the male protagonist. Brothers who are red and dark and disabled can read this book to wash their eyes. Personally, I think the growth of Ultra's spirit is well shaped. ε٩(๑≫ ₃ <)۶з