Swallow the Light

How about spending seven or eight chapters writing another character?

You can travel back and forth, so you don't have to buy accessories from modern times and go back to get the oldest muskets. Even if you don't get the most advanced firearms, wouldn't it be nice to choose a better modern firearm and find customized parts from several manufacturers to assemble it back?

Originally, I had been using long spears, but I abandoned them and used wooden sticks and short axes instead.

You've been slipping away, you're really good at it, and you're still fighting with the gangsters in Chapter 83. Do you have to wait until Chapter 1000 for you to have sex with Boar Skin?

This nickname is perfunctory. If he wants to be called Hu Yan, should his nickname be Sanhuo?

It seems that the author has never eaten real pancakes.

There were many novels in the Ming Dynasty, and the literacy rate was very high. The author scrawled

It's a reward for saving lives and emergencies. You can taste it yourself.

Under normal circumstances it is 30%, and in good times it is 50%? This is the failure rate

The writing style is good, and the concept is good, but it is too wordy, with too many useless details, and it is basically all side details, and it is also scattered here and there.