I found an ice beauty! Not only is he a good-looking person, but he also has a lot of magic weapons. Has his life reached its peak from now on? Feng Su uses his own tragic experience to tell you that you are wrong, absolutely wrong, and you will only get further and further away from the top.
After being frozen four times at home, Feng Su silently ran to his friend's house holding the quilt, but he couldn't beat him and hid.
I wanted to be a Phoenix man and reach the top of my life, but I didn't want to die if I didn't work hard.
The writing is smooth and the plot is touching. Come on!
Finally changed the status! ! Come on!
Happy May Day to Da Da. Xiao Hua wishes Da Da's masterpieces to become popular as soon as possible.
Good evening, the painter is here
The fish come to read the masterpiece, come on, little fish
Good evening, the painter is here to support me
Nice writing in big letters, saved as a favorite
Thanks to Xiaoyu for your support, the 100-word review is here as promised~~
One thing to say, when I first read this book, I found it very interesting. Firstly, the setting is very interesting, and secondly, the character of the male protagonist is very likable. The opening chapter exaggerates a scene of thousands of miles of ice, and then mentions cultivation through Feng Su, and then throws out the cultivation system and world view. It is really done in one go, very natural, and amazing. Later, the plot introduces the world view and cultivation system of Qi training, Qi condensation period, etc., All of which are introduced to the needs of the plot. Not only does it not seem stiff, but it is very appropriate. It can be seen that the writing style is really concise.
The connection of the plot is very smooth and natural. From picking up the ice beauty to getting acquainted with the ice beauty, it can attract the reader's attention. It is very suitable for immersive reading. The perspective selection is also very appropriate, but the pace is a bit slow. The book is positioned as a passionate fantasy novel. The exciting points in the first three chapters are not enough foreshadowing (personal feeling). In other words, the plot is not explosive enough and is a bit dull. It is guided by curiosity and exploration alone. The plot will seem a bit draggy (please share your personal opinions with readers~). The first few chapters don't tell much, but the length is too large. It will appear a bit cumbersome in the current three-chapter online article. However, this is greatly made up for by the title and introduction of the work. However, it is still recommended to move the exciting points forward in the later period and appropriately speed up the advancement of the plot to achieve better reading and book chasing effects.
The details are portrayed very well. For example, in Chapter 4, Dongxue's disappointment after Feng Su praised Wenze paved the way for the emotional line between the two. The small details are handled very delicately. Secondly, the adventure in the Northern Cold Realm is very exciting, and the perspective is well handled. It is very enjoyable to watch the plots one after another, but it always feels too bland. The plot has few ups and downs, and the "golden finger" of Fengsu pretending to be a pig and eating a tiger is not clearly reflected in the early stage (if it is Wen Ze's The words are good), Chapter 15 gradually reveals the emotional line of the male and female protagonists bit by bit, Chapter 21 is an impressive chapter, depicting Feng Su's character very vividly, and up to this point, the character of the protagonist has been completely shaped. He is very good at portraying the characters, and it is worth learning!
Judging from the above analysis and perception, DaDa has carefully considered the continuation of the plot and the emotional experience of the characters. It seems to be very smooth, but the excitement is insufficient, and there is a little lack of foreshadowing before the climax of the plot. But overall, the writing is good and the concept is clever. It is really a very good fantasy novel!
Apart from envy and jealousy, there is only sourness...
The writing is smooth and the plot is touching. Come on!
Finally changed the status! ! Come on!
Happy May Day to Da Da. Xiao Hua wishes Da Da's masterpieces to become popular as soon as possible.
Good evening, the painter is here
The fish come to read the masterpiece, come on, little fish
Good evening, the painter is here to support me
Nice writing in big letters, saved as a favorite
Thanks to Xiaoyu for your support, the 100-word review is here as promised~~
One thing to say, when I first read this book, I found it very interesting. Firstly, the setting is very interesting, and secondly, the character of the male protagonist is very likable. The opening chapter exaggerates a scene of thousands of miles of ice, and then mentions cultivation through Feng Su, and then throws out the cultivation system and world view. It is really done in one go, very natural, and amazing. Later, the plot introduces the world view and cultivation system of Qi training, Qi condensation period, etc., All of which are introduced to the needs of the plot. Not only does it not seem stiff, but it is very appropriate. It can be seen that the writing style is really concise. The connection of the plot is very smooth and natural. From picking up the ice beauty to getting acquainted with the ice beauty, it can attract the reader's attention. It is very suitable for immersive reading. The perspective selection is also very appropriate, but the pace is a bit slow. The book is positioned as a passionate fantasy novel. The exciting points in the first three chapters are not enough foreshadowing (personal feeling). In other words, the plot is not explosive enough and is a bit dull. It is guided by curiosity and exploration alone. The plot will seem a bit draggy (please share your personal opinions with readers~). The first few chapters don't tell much, but the length is too large. It will appear a bit cumbersome in the current three-chapter online article. However, this is greatly made up for by the title and introduction of the work. However, it is still recommended to move the exciting points forward in the later period and appropriately speed up the advancement of the plot to achieve better reading and book chasing effects. The details are portrayed very well. For example, in Chapter 4, Dongxue's disappointment after Feng Su praised Wenze paved the way for the emotional line between the two. The small details are handled very delicately. Secondly, the adventure in the Northern Cold Realm is very exciting, and the perspective is well handled. It is very enjoyable to watch the plots one after another, but it always feels too bland. The plot has few ups and downs, and the "golden finger" of Fengsu pretending to be a pig and eating a tiger is not clearly reflected in the early stage (if it is Wen Ze's The words are good), Chapter 15 gradually reveals the emotional line of the male and female protagonists bit by bit, Chapter 21 is an impressive chapter, depicting Feng Su's character very vividly, and up to this point, the character of the protagonist has been completely shaped. He is very good at portraying the characters, and it is worth learning! Judging from the above analysis and perception, DaDa has carefully considered the continuation of the plot and the emotional experience of the characters. It seems to be very smooth, but the excitement is insufficient, and there is a little lack of foreshadowing before the climax of the plot. But overall, the writing is good and the concept is clever. It is really a very good fantasy novel!
Apart from envy and jealousy, there is only sourness...
Good evening, I'm here to visit