· Clan and family power plots and secret struggles· Emperors and generals fighting each other·
The heroes are chasing each other, the achievements have been made, and the bones have dried up. Two lines of history have been written in history. A smile will last through the ages.
Twenty-one years ago, a sudden "Red Flame Rebellion" caused the Red Flame warriors who were originally the forbidden army of the Mu clan to live in exile in the Northern Desert, bearing the name of rebellion. The Ji Dynasty, which had been glorious for six hundred years, split into Dong Ji and west Ji overnight. Since then, for the first time in the history of Dongzhou, there has been a pattern of two dynasties coexisting in opposition.
Twenty-one years later, Meng Jian and Yun Fan met in Mingyue City in the Su Kingdom of Jibei and vowed to compete. The troubled times have officially begun.
This is a magnificent epic about the rise and fall of a dynasty, a group portrait story, with [narrative] as the core, telling the past of this era.
As a girl, I was inexplicably told "I'm used to watching this, a male channel, fantasy." The Jinjiang old Ford abandoned me and crawled over to take a look. I immediately indulged myself and read more than 50 chapters in one go all night long.
I shouted loudly, "Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!"
To be honest, it's really beautiful. I especially like group portraits. Maybe it's because I have a starry sea in my heart. I especially like the majestic stories of rivers and lakes and courts. There are so many people, and everyone has their own characteristics and stories. It's like you're not reading a novel, or looking at a paper person in the second dimension. It's so real that you can find such a person in the world. Of course, this is a fantasy story, and it's impossible to find someone who can punch through a wall with one punch. I mean the character, soul, and experience of that character. "This is a person" and "this is reality." This is the understanding of being in the situation and empathizing with it.
An author who can create the main characters and write all the auxiliary characters well, not only the writing style, but also the mood and thoughts feel very stable. There are also many mindless novels in romance novels. Love for the sake of love, the characters are on the surface, which is very enjoyable to read because there is no need to use your brain at all. Mary Sue Jack Sue makes you self-satisfied. Not everyone likes to be the protagonist, but everyone is their own protagonist.
I'll be vague to avoid spoilers. At first, I thought Meng Jian was the protagonist and Liang Yu was a character, but then I discovered that Yun Fan also seemed to be the protagonist. Then I discovered that Liang Yi was also important, and Dong Ji's Su Kingdom and Emperor were both key. As I watched, I kept thinking, what's the story between Liang Yi and Nangong Liuli (sorry, this is the part I'm instinctively interested in, hahaha), what happened to Yun Yao, it seems that Lu Weiwen and our great beauty Gu Yina are interesting, and the silly and cute Xinzaima and Liu Fenghun are also interesting...
Some people may find it tiring to watch, because the world view is grand, the timeline is long, there are many people, and there are many things going on. When I first watched it, I still took pen and paper to record it. But later I found that it was not necessary. The author would focus on describing or repeating important characters, and there were also some characters mentioned in the dialogue, which was a kind of buried thread. But I think there is nothing wrong with this. I forget the previous after seeing the back, and then look back and see who has not been forgotten along the way. It is such a wonderful thing to recall and review. In short, it successfully stuck to me.
To put it boldly, whoever thinks he can't understand it doesn't think he has a low IQ? ! (Expansion) Please actively prove yourself, you can find endless fun in it.
Or maybe I think too much. I can always read a lot of humanity and darkness from the characters' interactions with each other. I feel sick and chilled, but I also feel warm from some friendship connections. As a contradictory "pessimistic ball bomber", sometimes I yearn for the idea of the Black Sky Sect's destruction of the world, and sometimes I feel that the world is beautiful, let's play for a while.
In short, isn't the human heart the most enduring and wonderful story in the world?
This is my first long review. I wrote it wherever I thought, and the logic is not so clear. In short, it is just a confession. Well, let me talk about my personal feelings from the overall experience. I really like this kind of large-frame article. The author will update it soon. I can't move anymore!
To those readers who have followed more than a hundred scenes
After the first volume of the story ends, I will renovate the entire first volume, from the psychology of the characters to the composition and vertical painting. The overall plot will not change. The fighting scenes and war scenes will be refined and renovated. Currently, we are only promoting the plot, so from time to time there will be revisions and previous renovations. But I will make major changes to the chapters about Meng Jian in Yanguo, let me tell you in advance, because those chapters are so poorly written that they look like two stories. Let me know in advance, and finally thank you for your support, although for two of them I don't know if you are a studio.
Thanks to the Prince of Tianqiong City for the reward
I didn't expect that the first volume would probably be a million words long.
Cute new comments, please don't comment
The author has written half a million words, and I will definitely not be able to finish them in a short time.
I would like to give a rough review here. To be honest, I don't often read articles with multiple protagonists in this narrative style. The author pointed out the style of this article at the beginning, explaining that this is a story with multiple protagonists. The prologue starts with a dialogue between two people, making it clear that this article is a narrative, and it is not a cool article.
I have read a few chapters, but only in the first few chapters you can see some intrigues, the intertwining of light and dark lines, and the author's writing is very strong, both in description and rendering. Why do I use rendering here? Because reading this book gave me a feeling of reading a script and a big-scale movie production, which I cannot describe with my lack of talent and knowledge.
I don't want to comment on my personal opinions. From the few chapters I have read so far, I really can't find any faults. All aspects are good. The emotional changes of the characters, the description of details, the dark and bright lines, and the foreshadowing are all very good. Anyway, I can't compare. I don't mean to brag. I really don't have any opinions to raise. After all, I am at this level. If you have other opinions, please don't criticize me.
That's about it. Although the author humbly says that it is only a niche book, in my opinion, it is a top-quality book with the flavor of becoming a god. Moreover, I think this book is very suitable for being made into a movie or TV series. I also hope that someone can comment on my humble work so that I can learn and improve.
No one knows how tomorrow will come
If you have already collected it, just start watching it from the fourteenth chapter.
The first thirteen scenes actually have nothing to do with the main storyline and are being revised. My personal suggestion is to save it first and wait until I finish the first volume and then read it when I write the second volume. Otherwise, the changes will make people confused, although there will be no major changes in the plot.
Awesome, highly recommended on the APP
The author has a certain understanding of ancient Chinese history. You can see the breadth and depth of history in the story, and the plots and wars are well written!
Thousand-mile horses often exist, but Bole does not always exist.
The description of the army is very detailed, I learned a lot
As a girl, I was inexplicably told "I'm used to watching this, a male channel, fantasy." The Jinjiang old Ford abandoned me and crawled over to take a look. I immediately indulged myself and read more than 50 chapters in one go all night long. I shouted loudly, "Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!" To be honest, it's really beautiful. I especially like group portraits. Maybe it's because I have a starry sea in my heart. I especially like the majestic stories of rivers and lakes and courts. There are so many people, and everyone has their own characteristics and stories. It's like you're not reading a novel, or looking at a paper person in the second dimension. It's so real that you can find such a person in the world. Of course, this is a fantasy story, and it's impossible to find someone who can punch through a wall with one punch. I mean the character, soul, and experience of that character. "This is a person" and "this is reality." This is the understanding of being in the situation and empathizing with it. An author who can create the main characters and write all the auxiliary characters well, not only the writing style, but also the mood and thoughts feel very stable. There are also many mindless novels in romance novels. Love for the sake of love, the characters are on the surface, which is very enjoyable to read because there is no need to use your brain at all. Mary Sue Jack Sue makes you self-satisfied. Not everyone likes to be the protagonist, but everyone is their own protagonist. I'll be vague to avoid spoilers. At first, I thought Meng Jian was the protagonist and Liang Yu was a character, but then I discovered that Yun Fan also seemed to be the protagonist. Then I discovered that Liang Yi was also important, and Dong Ji's Su Kingdom and Emperor were both key. As I watched, I kept thinking, what's the story between Liang Yi and Nangong Liuli (sorry, this is the part I'm instinctively interested in, hahaha), what happened to Yun Yao, it seems that Lu Weiwen and our great beauty Gu Yina are interesting, and the silly and cute Xinzaima and Liu Fenghun are also interesting... Some people may find it tiring to watch, because the world view is grand, the timeline is long, there are many people, and there are many things going on. When I first watched it, I still took pen and paper to record it. But later I found that it was not necessary. The author would focus on describing or repeating important characters, and there were also some characters mentioned in the dialogue, which was a kind of buried thread. But I think there is nothing wrong with this. I forget the previous after seeing the back, and then look back and see who has not been forgotten along the way. It is such a wonderful thing to recall and review. In short, it successfully stuck to me. To put it boldly, whoever thinks he can't understand it doesn't think he has a low IQ? ! (Expansion) Please actively prove yourself, you can find endless fun in it. Or maybe I think too much. I can always read a lot of humanity and darkness from the characters' interactions with each other. I feel sick and chilled, but I also feel warm from some friendship connections. As a contradictory "pessimistic ball bomber", sometimes I yearn for the idea of the Black Sky Sect's destruction of the world, and sometimes I feel that the world is beautiful, let's play for a while. In short, isn't the human heart the most enduring and wonderful story in the world? This is my first long review. I wrote it wherever I thought, and the logic is not so clear. In short, it is just a confession. Well, let me talk about my personal feelings from the overall experience. I really like this kind of large-frame article. The author will update it soon. I can't move anymore!
To those readers who have followed more than a hundred scenes
After the first volume of the story ends, I will renovate the entire first volume, from the psychology of the characters to the composition and vertical painting. The overall plot will not change. The fighting scenes and war scenes will be refined and renovated. Currently, we are only promoting the plot, so from time to time there will be revisions and previous renovations. But I will make major changes to the chapters about Meng Jian in Yanguo, let me tell you in advance, because those chapters are so poorly written that they look like two stories. Let me know in advance, and finally thank you for your support, although for two of them I don't know if you are a studio.
Thanks to the Prince of Tianqiong City for the reward
I didn't expect that the first volume would probably be a million words long.
Cute new comments, please don't comment
The author has written half a million words, and I will definitely not be able to finish them in a short time. I would like to give a rough review here. To be honest, I don't often read articles with multiple protagonists in this narrative style. The author pointed out the style of this article at the beginning, explaining that this is a story with multiple protagonists. The prologue starts with a dialogue between two people, making it clear that this article is a narrative, and it is not a cool article. I have read a few chapters, but only in the first few chapters you can see some intrigues, the intertwining of light and dark lines, and the author's writing is very strong, both in description and rendering. Why do I use rendering here? Because reading this book gave me a feeling of reading a script and a big-scale movie production, which I cannot describe with my lack of talent and knowledge. I don't want to comment on my personal opinions. From the few chapters I have read so far, I really can't find any faults. All aspects are good. The emotional changes of the characters, the description of details, the dark and bright lines, and the foreshadowing are all very good. Anyway, I can't compare. I don't mean to brag. I really don't have any opinions to raise. After all, I am at this level. If you have other opinions, please don't criticize me. That's about it. Although the author humbly says that it is only a niche book, in my opinion, it is a top-quality book with the flavor of becoming a god. Moreover, I think this book is very suitable for being made into a movie or TV series. I also hope that someone can comment on my humble work so that I can learn and improve.
No one knows how tomorrow will come
If you have already collected it, just start watching it from the fourteenth chapter.
The first thirteen scenes actually have nothing to do with the main storyline and are being revised. My personal suggestion is to save it first and wait until I finish the first volume and then read it when I write the second volume. Otherwise, the changes will make people confused, although there will be no major changes in the plot.
Awesome, highly recommended on the APP
The author has a certain understanding of ancient Chinese history. You can see the breadth and depth of history in the story, and the plots and wars are well written!
Thousand-mile horses often exist, but Bole does not always exist.
The description of the army is very detailed, I learned a lot