The Fierce Little Immortal

There are a lot of typos, brother, but it's really wonderful and I can't put it down.

I like reading your books. I finished the last one a long time ago.

You make me cry like a dog, and you still say you write a comedy? Hilarious? My wife cried after reading these ten chapters. Are you worthy of the monthly vote I gave you?

Haha, give me a monthly ticket

Good looking, good reading, come on, Xiaoxian!

Visiting brother, we should have signed the contract together. I happened to find it today and collected it!

I've been busy lately and haven't had time to read, so I voted for my monthly ticket.

If I am recruiting, I hope to get a sword fairy character

Since you asked me, I'm going to say it boldly. Don't be offended. Judging from your introduction and the first chapter, you have taken the old funny road again. This cannot be said to be bad. It's just that after reading your first book, readers will have a sense of fatigue, which will have a lot of impact on your book. But how big it will be is unknown! As for the plot, I won't comment on it, but as for the characters, you can make some people triple-change. He is like this, and then behaves like that. When you think he is pretending to be a character, he is indeed what you see in the end. This will increase the twists and turns and sense of reality. Note that it is partial, not all, which can bring out more hidden plots!

Yue Gui checks in to support, good afternoon