Go Guagua Sasuke

I also like Koga Ninja very much, but I think it's still the traveling kind.

It's very boring, the writing is too average, the dialogue is poorly written, and there are no highlights. There are also a lot of invalid words. Conversations between people are always filled with words such as anger and angry yelling, which is so boring and embarrassing to watch.

To be honest, you have to analyze the subject matter of this novel. This is not an orthodox show-off, but rather funny. But what's new is that the protagonist doesn't seem to be Lin Yu, but rather a croaking frog. This shows that the protagonist is the most ordinary ordinary person. He doesn't have any special abilities, maybe he just has a brother. The plot is also a bit too abrupt, it feels like the protagonist must be in trouble and everything will happen. You can write appropriately, but don't get into trouble as soon as you come out! There are also many mysterious behaviors of the protagonist. The author did not mention how old the protagonist is after time travel, so I can't say why he behaves like a child. There is also the woman named Mu Ningxia. She had already promised the protagonist to let her go on condition, but it turned out that the condition was to apologize to Xu, but it never happened. This is a breach of trust. This is normal, but the author later wrote a direct apology to the protagonist, so he said he had apologized? I would like to ask the author what this means. There are also typos, so don't mention them. The most disgusting thing is that the subject matter is obviously pretty good, but the writing style is so elementary, I can't stand it!

The plot is too slow to write, the protagonist is mentally retarded, and then you have to write about a ninja. The question then becomes, how much do you know about ninjutsu? This is the simplest one. Don't talk about the Rasengan. If you don't use the classic tactic of white mist, the result will be water gun shooting and iron sand palm. You might as well not write it.

A good review is only one or two cents, which shouldn't be much. How much did it cost?

No one can even make typos in their introduction.

The author wants us to study hard and persuade us to quit the novel. The protagonist is weak and has some wisdom in almost every chapter. The character and background conflict. The setting of time travel and strong family background is a very stupid route. The author has not understood the identity class. Moreover, the protagonist's talent is not the kind that does not require hard work. It all depends on the Pokémon itself. If you want to go to "I Really Want to Be a Trainer!" The style has become completely different.

Does anyone recommend me a Pokémon fanfic with a female protagonist?

Are you telling me that Gengar will die in battle?

The plot is too nonsensical, the water frog can also use thunder fists, he can write whatever he wants, the protagonist is hypocritical