Reverse Cultivation and Cut the Sky

This surprise is so cute. It seems that their relationship between father and son is very harmonious, like friends.

Traveling through time and space, as if returning to ancient times

Great writing, please support me

I can feel some adjustments in the character description and dialogue. When naming people and things, we must pay attention to the connection between cause and effect. For novels, the logic can be clearer, but it must be fluent. This is just my humble opinion

Personal feelings, personal feelings, personal feelings, I hope all of you who like "Reverse Cultivation and Zhantian" will appreciate it... The tone is relaxed, there is some ridicule in the words, the meal is relaxed, and back to the topic, the beginning is a familiar routine, struggling to survive and practice in adversity, just for that obsession. With the introduction and the cover of the novel, there is no doubt that it is a passionate and exciting novel. Read the first three chapters first. In the trend of chasing and abandoning in these three chapters, the golden finger of the protagonist Wei Dong is so real. His power is doubled and more than quadrupled. With Sima Bin as the background, you can smell the smell of cheating, which is a good burden for a refreshing novel! There is also the age of the male protagonist, who is endowed with huge talents. It is conceivable that he will become the youngest master! Then came the gorgeous appearance of the third lady - Li Yun'er. The identity of the female thief was refreshing. With the princess as a good helper, she had a good preparation for Wei Dong's cheating after the meeting. The high talent at the beginning plus the powerful teammates, it seems that this exciting and passionate road is gone forever (hahaha). However, the night exploration of the slums later made me change my mind a little in Chapter 15. The plot moved towards a branch line of solving the case and suspense, and it turned out! ! ! Li Yuner is gone! ! Is this the first level where Wei Dong begins his heaven-defying cultivation and changes his personality? It's a bit cruel... As Wei Dong's adventures, hard labor, treasure storage space, and the interaction between Nanman and Dongfang Jing follow, the writing does have a sense of youth, and he can actually resurrect Li Yun'er. Wow... The author can't bear to leave this character (hahaha) Entering the inner sect, the plot of selecting exercises is also written according to the routine. It has both exciting and exciting points. It is unconventional. The plot has twists and turns, but it mainly lacks a sense of structure, such as the division of forces that shake the entire continent. The main line also has long-term goals, short-term goals, branch lines, etc. It is not clear enough, but overall it is still a good and exciting novel. The plot is exciting and the rhythm is tight. Please come and update it! ! ! The future is promising and I look forward to becoming a god! Thanks!

As the story unfolds, or as your cultivation progresses, you can feel like you are entering it. Come on.

Lovely new report, Thank you for your attention, thank you very much

The ending feels like Inception

The legendary boss appears

Why did it stop again? Is something wrong?