Immortal Yu Ji

I was typing in the manuscript box on the webpage, but it was not saved. Part of the manuscript was lost. Will post a new chapter later

The number of words in a chapter is a bit too much. The author can divide it a little bit. Generally, one chapter can be kept at 2,500 to 3,000 words.

I have a question. As someone who wants to write a novel but has not yet started writing it, I would like to ask the author what motivates him to write it? Thank you so much.

Yes, yes, writing novels must be vulgar so that they can be down to earth. Once they are down to earth, they will be interesting.

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The last sentence is a bit convoluted, hahaha

The writing so far is too stable. The advantage is that it will not collapse. The disadvantage is that it lacks "spirituality" and is not "elegant" enough, and the characters are not very distinct. It may also have something to do with my own preference for reading. The pace is relatively slow and the storyline is slow to develop, but some signs have been seen. Personal sense, just consider it as appropriate, come on. It's a very detailed novel

In the beginning, I planned to set my book this way, but later you will find that you have forgotten to set it this way, so you might as well not have it.

Yes, the first chapter is written just right. The only flaw is that you need to click on who said it before speaking. For example, Zhang San said: "One, two, three." After hearing this, Li Si nodded slightly, and then said: "Four, five, six, seven." In this way, it can be clearly distinguished who is talking, and then it can also reflect the character's expression changes and inner activities.

The last few sentences are indeed beautifully written, but the atmosphere in the early stages was not well rendered, and the next three sentences seemed a bit stiff. An atmospheric statement like this should be uttered using the character's mouth and eyes, which makes it easier to feel involved. However, the current development of the story is in a dull period, which is not suitable for exaggerating the atmosphere like this. The function of these words is to push a certain clear emotion and make it stronger. It's great for finishing, but the connection should be reconsidered. (Personal feelings are subject to the author's discretion. After all, everyone's feelings are different)