Thousands of calamities have beenfalling the body, but the will is immortal! The heart of a tyrant, the road to becoming an emperor, the shameless boy rises against the will of heaven! All kinds of causes and effects are added to my body, and all kinds of causes and effects help me reach the peak of my martial arts! ----- "One day! Pick up the sun, moon and shatter the stars with your hands!"
"One day! One finger destroys the sky and destroys it!"
"One day! Raise your hand and change the world!"
"I am determined! Don't dare to get close to me! I will never be affected by any cause and effect!"...--Xia Fan
It's a cool story, it's always cool, villages, towns, cities, big cities, countries, continents, universes... One boss after another, you can basically guess the town by looking at the village, but it's boring if you read too much, because the story keeps repeating, the plot is mostly the same, you meet the boss by chance and then defeat the boss at a level.
. To write cool articles, you have to be new and give people a different feeling. The market for cool writing is only that big. If you are a novice writer with no reputation, you will not see your work if you want to read it. Unless you hit the charts. Personally, I think it must be new and the characterization must be good. The sword comes, and the sword moves in the snow. The characters written by others have their own personalities, and every reader has a favorite character. Shuangwen felt that the protagonist was like that, secretly leveling up and fighting monsters, pretending to be a pig and eating the tiger, and after pretending to be cool with the village chief, he pretended to be with the mayor. After basically watching Counterattack on the Village Chief, you already know how you can counterattack the Mayor, and you no longer have the desire to read any more. You already know the finale, what else are you watching? Right. The market is only so big and there are only so many readers. How many people can you attract? Is it important to have a famous book? For those who read swordsmanship, 90% of them have read The Legend of Swordsman in the Snow. Chasing the author's reputation after his writing style, one of his books seems to be called Peach Blossom. Even after two years of discontinuation, there are still people searching for it. There are still book reviews. If you write something that no one will read, just write it again. The key is to think about the type and style of your famous work and how many readers it can attract. It is not recommended for newcomers who have no financial resources to write cool articles. Because when others see your book, they don't know how many years it has been.
You can read Chapter 17. Addicted
So funny
The plot is awesome
It's a great masterpiece, worth reading. I've saved it and will look back on it.
Another day without collections?
I wiped it
Follow along and wish the author a happy New Year.
Awesome, every detail is handled so well, but I don't have the time or interest to read novels recently.
I'm leaving. See you next time! Come on! I hope your recommendation will be successful in the next two weeks!
There was no update last time I came here, so I'm going to wait for hundreds of chapters before reading it, otherwise it would be too uncomfortable to read each chapter one by one.
This paragraph is so well written!
What a great big book! More updates!
A certain tea comes to visit.
Read four chapters.
Hmm. . . How to say it. . .
Let's blow it first.
First of all, the plot is very deep and leaves a lot of suspense. .
I checked my eyes and saw that it was someone who made the outline.
The second thing is the character.
Personally, I quite like the male protagonist design.
Finally, there is the description of the battle scene.
I'm very envious of this.
Gan!
After blowing,
Next start spraying.
The following are purely personal opinions.
If the author doesn't like it,
Can be deleted.
First, the plot.
The depth is enough. . But. . As a price.
The pit was also dug very deep.
I hope the author has already thought about how to fill it out.
Otherwise it will be very difficult later.
Secondly, the opening is full of suspense, and the quality does seem very high.
But. . . It will also cause impatient people to watch. .
It is recommended to add a prologue.
Second, personality.
Personally, I feel that the pace of the plot is too fast.
There are too many characters.
There are only so many words per chapter.
There are naturally fewer descriptive sentences.
So it makes me feel that some people are confused.
Finally, the details.
I read four chapters. I did some statistics.
Found 6 typos, 3 sentences that should have been broken but not broken, and 5 incorrect sentences (this is all my personal feeling.)
I hope the author will pay attention.
Finally, I'll give you a red envelope.
There will be no advertising.
Lazy
Personal advice
It's a cool story, it's always cool, villages, towns, cities, big cities, countries, continents, universes... One boss after another, you can basically guess the town by looking at the village, but it's boring if you read too much, because the story keeps repeating, the plot is mostly the same, you meet the boss by chance and then defeat the boss at a level. . To write cool articles, you have to be new and give people a different feeling. The market for cool writing is only that big. If you are a novice writer with no reputation, you will not see your work if you want to read it. Unless you hit the charts. Personally, I think it must be new and the characterization must be good. The sword comes, and the sword moves in the snow. The characters written by others have their own personalities, and every reader has a favorite character. Shuangwen felt that the protagonist was like that, secretly leveling up and fighting monsters, pretending to be a pig and eating the tiger, and after pretending to be cool with the village chief, he pretended to be with the mayor. After basically watching Counterattack on the Village Chief, you already know how you can counterattack the Mayor, and you no longer have the desire to read any more. You already know the finale, what else are you watching? Right. The market is only so big and there are only so many readers. How many people can you attract? Is it important to have a famous book? For those who read swordsmanship, 90% of them have read The Legend of Swordsman in the Snow. Chasing the author's reputation after his writing style, one of his books seems to be called Peach Blossom. Even after two years of discontinuation, there are still people searching for it. There are still book reviews. If you write something that no one will read, just write it again. The key is to think about the type and style of your famous work and how many readers it can attract. It is not recommended for newcomers who have no financial resources to write cool articles. Because when others see your book, they don't know how many years it has been.
You can read Chapter 17. Addicted So funny The plot is awesome
It's a great masterpiece, worth reading. I've saved it and will look back on it.
Another day without collections?
I wiped it
Follow along and wish the author a happy New Year.
Awesome, every detail is handled so well, but I don't have the time or interest to read novels recently. I'm leaving. See you next time! Come on! I hope your recommendation will be successful in the next two weeks!
There was no update last time I came here, so I'm going to wait for hundreds of chapters before reading it, otherwise it would be too uncomfortable to read each chapter one by one.
This paragraph is so well written!
What a great big book! More updates!
A certain tea comes to visit.
Read four chapters. Hmm. . . How to say it. . . Let's blow it first. First of all, the plot is very deep and leaves a lot of suspense. . I checked my eyes and saw that it was someone who made the outline. The second thing is the character. Personally, I quite like the male protagonist design. Finally, there is the description of the battle scene. I'm very envious of this. Gan! After blowing, Next start spraying. The following are purely personal opinions. If the author doesn't like it, Can be deleted. First, the plot. The depth is enough. . But. . As a price. The pit was also dug very deep. I hope the author has already thought about how to fill it out. Otherwise it will be very difficult later. Secondly, the opening is full of suspense, and the quality does seem very high. But. . . It will also cause impatient people to watch. . It is recommended to add a prologue. Second, personality. Personally, I feel that the pace of the plot is too fast. There are too many characters. There are only so many words per chapter. There are naturally fewer descriptive sentences. So it makes me feel that some people are confused. Finally, the details. I read four chapters. I did some statistics. Found 6 typos, 3 sentences that should have been broken but not broken, and 5 incorrect sentences (this is all my personal feeling.) I hope the author will pay attention. Finally, I'll give you a red envelope. There will be no advertising. Lazy