Cultivating Immortality Begins in an Ancient Tomb

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The first three chapters are extremely attractive, with a very good angle and very attractive. The author's control of rhythm and characterization are very good, which shows that he has a deep foundation. Starting from Chapter 4, after entering the plot, there are a few more cliches. But thanks to the author's skill, the plot is still exciting. Of course, I felt like I was missing a bit of aura. There is also a feeling of déjà vu... Maybe it's because I'm a bookworm and am a bit picky, so don't blame the author. Later, the gods and Taoist legendary figures added color to the novel and allowed me to find the missing aura. Personally, I feel that if you use the spirit of tradition less, it will be the finishing touch. If you use it too much, you will feel that it is less creative and less aura. What's more, the dazzling characters were explained a little hastily. When I was reading without getting to the end of my story, there was a sudden change... This made me feel like the author was in a hurry to get to the next plot, or to get to the main plot. Also, ancient tombs, yellow skins, ancient corpses, etc., Although these themes are given a different kind of excitement by the author's pen, their essence is more or less depressing and stale. When I read it, I didn't have a particularly strong sense of substitution, although the ancient tombs and the ancient corpses are connected in series with the previous part of the book. I hope the author can add some humor elements to adjust the atmosphere, otherwise it will just be fast-paced and cram-feeding the plot. Although it is very enjoyable, it will make you feel tired after watching it for a long time, and the impression will be easily blurred. Finally, the above are all personal feelings and only represent me! If what I said is wrong or overstated, please forgive me. Because I like this book very much, otherwise I wouldn't write so many reviews. I wish this book will be a big hit and become a god in the future! Come on!

How can it rank first in monthly votes with only a few hundred thousand words? I just came to Zongheng and don't know much about it.

It must have gone to other websites! Trying to use money to become instantly famous doesn't work. Writing honestly is the right way.

I'm not Tuo'ang, I'm a big boss at Bian Fortress. You can tell from the beginning that he's a veteran. The writing is conflicting and without any delay. The plot is wonderful, unique and innovative. There's something in it. It's obvious that the author has a thoughtful idea! Totally worth collecting and reading! (I collected it first and learned slowly)

Could it be that you want to eat bats?

As an old bookworm, let's take a look back and see if this author's book is good or not, and whether it's half-finished! (I often see some novels that are half-finished, which is disgusting)

I suddenly had a fever and caught a cold. I thought I had won the bid. Fortunately, the temperature dropped today, otherwise I would have been afraid of being quarantined.

Those who have achieved results will not be updated, so I will update every day until I am defeated! Writing more than 5 hours a day! Single-digit collections are being updated! Why!

There won't be eunuchs at the frontier, right?