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The ocean doesn't have as much water as you do

I saw that there were many characters appearing in Chapter 10, but they all had no names. I didn't even understand the names of his parents and grandfather. His grandfather's name was his grandfather and his mother's name.

Is it illegal for a village leader to write to the village chief?

After reading chapter 365, there was a sudden turning point. The front and back don't match.

It's like the foot wrap is long and long. I wish the protagonist would go to the toilet and give you a detailed description of the chapters and word count. There are countless poisonous points. I can't study it in detail. If I study it carefully, I won't be able to read it. I just give it a 7.0. How can the author be so embarrassed?

The plot is bland, the language skills are poor, and there are a lot of bad points. The most serious thing is that it is too long-winded. The plot advances very slowly. It is such a big deal that I wish I could write a thesis on all aspects. The protagonist goes to a certain place, how to get there, how many minutes to walk, etc. It will be a long paragraph for you. It is so long-winded.

It's okay at the beginning, but I can't stand it anymore:

Author: Your novel is too colloquial. If you can change your personal colloquialism, your novel will be more interesting.