Cold Wind Sword Blazing

RT. It's not necessarily correct, it's just my personal feeling as a reader. Maybe the author has his own ideas and layout, so take the essence and discard the dross. 1. Liu Yifu did not portray well. Looking at it now, I feel that the author wants to portray Liu Yifu as a very tragic and positive character. When he was young, he had some ambitions and drive, just like the protagonist in the poem, but after years of baptism, he finally succumbed to the helplessness of reality, and finally became a tycoon who would do anything to seek power. And his unscrupulous behavior was not done voluntarily, but because of the fetters of his family, he had no choice but to do it. In fact, this is a very good character. If it can be portrayed well, it will definitely become a "difficult" character for readers. However, the author's characterization was overly focused on the so-called "blackening" of Liu Yifu in his later period, and he wrote less about his "positive" side, which was not revealed until the poem written by the protagonist in the main account. Personally, I feel that not only does this fail to describe Liu Yifu's contradictions and tragedy, but it also makes readers feel like they are "wrecked". Because in the early stage, his father Liu Yifu had always regarded him as a pure hero, but his sudden change caught people off guard. 2. The character of the protagonist changes too quickly. In the early stage, the protagonist has been described as a reborn person who has seen through the vicissitudes of the world, and does not take joy in things or feel sorrow in himself. Including relationships, he is also very cautious. Although he loves the daughter of the head of the Mo family, he can only bear to part with her because he knows that his life will be rough. Finally, after experiencing the catastrophe of life and death, he completely opened his heart. The description of this relationship felt very natural to me. However, the subsequent protagonist's acceptance of the eldest princess and Nangong progressed a bit too quickly, which was in great contrast with the previous chapters, especially Nangong. I know that the author has a foreshadowing for the protagonist to open a harem, and I also know that the author has made a lot of emotional descriptions for the readers and the protagonist to accept the eldest princess and Nangong, but I personally still feel that it is a bit rushed, and I feel unworthy of the leader of the Mo clan. 3. Wu Chaofeng did not explain clearly. Why did Wu Yizhi insist on giving his son such a calamity-worthy name? Doesn't he know how much disaster this name will bring to his son? The article just said that Wu Yizhi did not believe in the prophecy and allowed his son to suffer such a disaster. This explanation feels very pale. 4. Why did Grandpa Kunpeng give the protagonist the Sky-Slaying Sword. If the protagonist keeps feeding the Sky-Slaying Sword with the wine in the gourd, it will undoubtedly make it continue to grow and eventually control the protagonist. The protagonist uses the ink attack to control the Sky-Slaying Sword under some circumstances. If I had known, Grandpa Kunpeng didn't know about the existence of Mo Gong at the beginning, which means that Grandpa Kunpeng's plan is very likely to make the protagonist become a demon who brings trouble to the world. At first, I thought Grandpa Kunpeng was also a villain, but later on, I felt that he was really serious about helping the protagonist, so I felt that the author's portrayal here was not very good. 5. There are many characters similar to Liu Yifu, such as Taoists. On the one hand, they pursue Taoist departmental interests. On the other hand, they also hope to revive the spiritual energy of the mainland, sacrifice themselves for righteousness, and pursue social interests. But the final description always feels a bit uninteresting. This is just my personal feeling as a reader, maybe the author has his own foreshadowing or ideas. I just hope that the author can take the essence and discard the dross after reading it, and don't rashly destroy his own outline because of my personal thoughts. Maybe you think further than me.

How many wives will the protagonist have? From the current point of view, Mo Xi, Qin Qingcheng, and Su Yumo should be determined. It is estimated that these three also correspond to Kun Jitian's prophecy about the protagonist's love and thunder disaster. It is very likely that Kun Jitian's grandson (presumably granddaughter) is also the same. Yu'er is unlikely, but it's not impossible. Nangong looks very interesting now. This is only about a hundred chapters long, and the protagonist has always considered himself a very affectionate person. . .

To be honest, I think this book is very well written. Why are there so few people reading it? . . I found this book from the fantasy category ranking list. Come on, you will always succeed. When I have enough points, I will give you a recommendation vote.

Check in. The author really writes well, but there are still typos sometimes. . .

The writing is very good, the writing style is very good, the plot is also very attractive, and the background seems to be very grand. Come on, keep writing, and you will definitely get ahead.

Cuteness is useless in front of sexy

To be honest, this part is a bit frustrating to watch.

Does anyone know where I can check my points? Wondering when I can have a recommendation ticket.

The writing is really beautiful, the first few paragraphs

You said it was just a temporary farewell, but four years have passed and you haven't come back.