I Returned from Space

One million words is a milestone for me. As of now, I feel that some of the previous descriptions could be more detailed, although writing is not my strong point. Judging from the main story line, I don't have any regrets. I think the connection is more reasonable and there aren't too many unnecessary side stories.

Before I knew it, half a year had passed and I had already written 900,000. Although 900,000 can be read in a few days for many readers, for me it is the result of several hours a day and nearly 180 days of hard work. Because I still have to go to work and write a book, it is inevitable that there will be typos and sentence errors. I don't have much time to correct them. Please forgive me.

Going to an alien planet starts with building a courtyard.

As title.

Personally, I can't stand the fighting scenes in these chapters, and I really want to integrate them into the scenes you describe. But I just can't fit in. Maybe it's spread too far and it's a bit messy. It's purely a personal feeling.

Not bad, not bad, I'm very picky

The distance between the earth and the moon is 384,000, and the passenger speed is 22 kilometers per second. It can't be 5 hours. Isn't the inertial frame considered? This is the basis of physics. Since it is written down, it must be explained clearly, or you should not write the data at all. What's going on? When a robot spends 35 years in outer space at high speed, does it still have to consider the twin paradox?

I also wrote a book of this type, Space Pioneers.

Visiting a masterpiece, the subject matter is very novel and the writing is good. Come on, work hard! If you come back to visit me, I will definitely bookmark it. If you bother me, please let me know and delete it immediately----

Forget yesterday, this is a new beginning