Fenghuoshan River

"Do you have money?" "Of course!" "No! You didn't!"

Five hundred thousand words to mark the occasion~

Is this the real male protagonist online?

I still like Gui Chen's book very much, but if I have to give a long and vicious review, why bother? Now that I have finished writing a thankless article, I still have to face a wave of counterattacks from your fans. You want to be poisoned, so I can only be suicidal if I can only say it happily. Why bother? When I first read it, I had strong opinions on the first ten chapters, so I read it again and let's just talk about the first ten chapters. Chapter 1: Later generations once said that without Su Yu, Beixi would have died 50 years earlier. How old is Su Yu? When did you die? Let's just think of him as a champion. The 17-year-old hussar captain led the Guichen camp and was able to win countless battles and overwhelm all the governors. Without seven or eight years of military exploits, I'm afraid it wouldn't be possible. Two years after his death, the Northern Xi Kingdom fell in the eleventh year of Tianfu. He was almost 70 when he died. After a rough count, 10 people appeared in the first three chapters, and Su Jingchen only appeared once. What about the treatment of the protagonist? Chapter 4 is a fighting scene, which is very exciting and features five or six people. I almost forgot the name of the protagonist. In Chapter 5, the protagonist finally makes a stunning appearance, holding the bow of the man who just died. I quickly turned forward. Who was the man who died just now? The man killed by Wei Zhai's flying sword? Isn't he holding a sword in both hands? Could it be that the manuscript that Guichen saw is different from my version? When the Yingzhou army arrived, the four hundred bandits who were ambushing them did not move. The black-clad cavalry disappeared into the wilderness like ghosts. Wait, didn't the previous article talk about Chijiang Estuary, which is 500 miles away from Gyeongju? It turns out that the place name Chijiangkou is wilderness. . . . . . The cavalry appeared from the east. Where were the bandits? Let me tell you, there are four to five hundred refugees, four hundred bandits, as many black-clothed horse teams, and as many escort teams as they can suffocate among the refugees. So lively. Let me explain, the black-clad cavalry ambushed the refugees. The problem is that there are 400 bandits surrounding the refugees. The refugees don't know, what do the cavalry do to visit the horses? Refugees plus bandits, this is already a small team of a thousand people. If the black cavalry dares to take action, how many are there? The bandits followed the refugees. They had been afraid to take action because of the presence of the bodyguards. They asked the bodyguards how big their team was. This is a math problem, let me do the math for a while. The cavalry in black began to massacre the escorts. The bandits thought that an opportunity had come and began to attack the refugees. . . . . Bandit Niu knew that the man in black would never take action against him who was holding a knife and a gun. The two parties probably had a meeting to discuss it before. The road was facing the sky, each going to one side. You would rob yours and I would rob mine. We would not interfere with each other. Ram leopard! ! ! ! ! You are organized and undisciplined. Refugees are the work of bandits. What are you doing here? You deserve to be hurt. Chapter 6, the beautiful and cute little princess appears. The late emperor's favorite little princess? This year is the 11th year of Tianfu, late Emperor? It seems that the little princess is the younger sister of the current emperor? But aren't the emperor's sisters called the eldest princess and the princess? Who said that the current emperor is the son of the late emperor, so he can't be his younger brother? Oh, that little princess is the niece of the current emperor. Isn't the emperor's niece called the princess? 300 Miles from Yingzhou, uh, okay, let's forget about 500 miles from Qingzhou. What did the little princess do in Qingzhou before? You have to bring thousands of guards to play house, right? After walking out of the tent, the little princess saw the sky dotted with stars, and the refugees sitting in twos and threes? What? Qingyu, is the Qingyu Camp brought by Yingzhou Mu suitable for refugees to be stationed together? Can refugees move around in twos and threes next to the handsome tent? There were thousands of troops and 20,000 people stationed nearby. It turned out that in order to conceal the existence of the little princess and Xuzhou Mu, the refugees were stationed in the center of the camp. The real situation between the army and the people is the people's soldiers. Yingzhou City in 7 days. . . . Well, the army moved at a good speed. The refugees traveled 300 miles in 7 days. Could it be that Qingyu camp prepared horses for them? It must be that the border people of Gyeongju are good at riding and shooting. No wonder the protagonist is good at using bows and arrows, which are strictly controlled in any cold weapon era. What a wonderful description of the archery contest on the school field. 1,500 Gold for the arrow fight. Our guard Wang Shi has such a sharp eye. He can tell from the crowd that the protagonist has unique bones and extraordinary talents. In fact, he is the supreme elder of the host family, so he has such great rights. He can grab anyone on the roadside. Our Yingzhou military camp is located on the roadside, and only ten people can enter. Even if the protagonist doesn't even have a refugee card, what can you do? I have good archery skills. I can endure three arrows in one bow and four arrows in one bow. After all, I have five fingers. Five arrows fired in unison, hiss. . . . . No wonder Wang Shi let him in. The protagonist has six fingers on his right hand and can hold five arrows in his hand. What is he but a genius? Fire 26 arrows in a row? Oh my god, my Daqin elite's arms trembled after firing five arrows, and I must rest. Beixi is indeed a strong force in the world, and there are countless civilian masters. Why did Beixi die? Well, the country is about to perish. The people still have time to bet on the pearl, and the people still have time to watch and watch. As for the protagonist's incredible power, why wasn't it used against the Ram Leopard before? Although my lord picked up a bow and two arrows, it would be too bullying to kill him with stones. Gui Chen is so big, if you ask for a hammer, you will get a hammer, but we won't get angry.

The writing is great, the scenes are very profound, and I like the name Su Jingchen very much.

Finally finished reading it, the writing is majestic and worthy of the word "beacon fire", keep up the good work and keep an eye on you! I want to steal a lot of things for myself! Hahaha

The old eunuch actually has telepathy

Most of these things have never been seen by Grandma Liu who entered the Grand View Garden. Remember what the ancestors of the Jia family said about white sugar?

Seventy cents to buy peanuts is already very expensive...

I always feel that your writing is a bit off-kilter. It feels like writing a historical drama, but it is too consistent with the previous narrative plot. The way you write now is to describe this troubled world from the perspective of a certain main character. Although you are currently writing from the perspective of the prince and the assassin, it feels not prominent enough. The two lines are switched too frequently, so the writing is not prominent enough and the feelings are not deep enough. Of course, there are also good things. At least the scenes of troubled times and war are well described. Keep up the good work.