Daomangji

Your father has been arrested and your family is dead. Are you still in the mood to be humble? The main character is really big-hearted. It was too abrupt.

The writing and plot are so childish

For example, here. The description of the actions is too complicated, and you have to turn your head several times to understand the protagonist's actions. Novels are different from Chinese textbooks and need to be more direct. Language and descriptions should be concise and direct. Just explain the action directly

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Young Master Lin

This is spending a lot of money to grab a small coin.

Crazy words! ! ! I am an old fan of yours. I have been reading your books for two years. I appreciate every sentence, every word, and every punctuation mark. Every time I read it, I have endless aftertaste! ! !

Thanks to Mr. Madyu for the vote. I have collected your masterpieces and learned from them.

? ? ? If one party's life is in danger, the referee will not award a loss? So what's the use of having a referee? SB author

Seeing this, I have a little idea to say to Mr. Crazy Whisperer. This is just my personal opinion. Because I usually just read books and am not the one who finds faults.