Sword Rain in the Empty Mountain

It's just random writing, without the key points, and a little girl just got drunk. Thousands of words are not enough.

The male protagonist has a glassy heart and is disgusting.

At the beginning, it was the beginning of a good story; at the beginning, it also continued the development of a good story. Unfortunately, after entering the middle section, all kinds of shortcomings piled up. I don't know about others. Anyway, I saw all kinds of negative emotions. By the last 20%, I could only tell the story directly. I reached the last page, and sure enough, the author seemed exhausted and ended it hastily - I must say that he is also a conscientious author with a good writing style. I have paid all the remaining votes for this month, hoping to continue to improve my writing skills and write better works. After all, it is not easy to conceive.

This book is really rubbish, the protagonist is treated as a fool

I rarely give up in the middle of reading a book, but I held my nose halfway through this one and really kept reading. The protagonist always lives in being framed, and all good people are not rewarded. There are unfinished clues everywhere and the plot is a mess. Too ordinary

After seeing more than half of it, I really can't stand it anymore. It's so different from the dark alley.

Coming from a dark alley, so disappointing. The author is completely unable to control this kind of subject matter. He doesn't know what to express. He wanted to give up many times in the middle. I struggled to finish it. Bad review.

The plot design and character drawing are average, and the story is not told well.

Too many typos. Too much logic.

I read Dark Alley and saw that the author had this book, and it turned out hahahaha, shit