The Hard Road to the Azure Clouds

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I found the article to be good, and the language is very deep and connotative. The logic is strict, the plot is also very good, and the writing has a sense of timelessness. However, it is not the general trend of online articles and cannot retain readers. Nowadays, many online articles are unrealistic, shabby, and the writing style is not very good, but this is what readers like. Are you angry? This kind of steady approach is no longer popular... Support it!

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Good article, but I still have to criticize it. Characters appear directly at the beginning, so although the first chapter is about daily life, the rhythm is compact, the characters are vivid, and the writing skills are well established. Don't you think it's weird when a paragraph ends with a comma? The protagonist's name is Ananda (fourth tone). This is really a dramatic scene, and there is a similar one later. There are no other obvious flaws or poisonous points. The plot is good. Come on and update it. I hope you will be a millionaire soon.