A Leaf's Journey

Come on, come on. The writing is a bit green. It's better to put quotation marks around the character's words. The previous chapters did not reveal much about the background and world framework, which is not attractive enough. In fact, it might be better to add a wedge in the front.

Good evening, come on (ง •̀_•́)ง Come and see me when you have time.

Did the protagonist become a god and become immortal like most of them, or did he finally return to his roots just like his name? Are you thinking too far ahead? Is the signing still far away?

A very good novel, very exciting, I recommend everyone to read it

Good morning! Happy writing in the new week!

The little fish in the rapids came to read, I have received my attention, I hope we can support each other, thank you 88

Keep up the good work and update

I've finished writing again. I've committed a crime.

So wonderful! I think there should be an exception later and forced absorption.

Ye Qin (qin) always thought it was pronounced tan- ̗̀(๑ᵔ⌔ᵔ๑)