When Pangu first split the primordial chaos, Heaven and Earth took shape, and the Four Symbols rose beneath the Taiji.
As the primordial world settled, the Three Clans emerged. In the first great tribulation of Dragon and Han, the Candle Emperor appeared.
Hongjun passed down three thousand wondrous teachings, and the Seven Sages of the Heavens attained the profound Dao.
Nuwa created the world and earned boundless merit; Houtu completed the Six Paths of Reincarnation.
The conflict between the Wu and the Yao finally ended, and stones were smelted to mend the sky and protect all living beings.
The Three Sovereigns and Five Emperors ruled the world, while the struggle between Shang and Zhou brought about the Investiture of the Gods.
The journey west to obtain the scriptures seemed to be a contest between Buddhism and Daoism.
All things in the world have their Dao. Follow the Dao, and Heaven will bless you.
May those who come after remember: the cycle of cause and effect is real.
This book will break the mold, drawing on historical myths, legends, and fiction to bring China's history to life on its pages. I hope to show all my readers a prehistoric world that feels even more real.
Those who become gods or Buddhas are not above it all; they, too, have emotions and desires. This book also reveals the secret loves, hatreds, and feuds among the gods, immortals, Buddhas, and various sects, as well as how the protagonist matches wits with the Sages and turns the tide!
I am Pikachu and Bi Diao, a down-and-out online writer. Today I am here to briefly analyze my views on this book, The Legend of Candle Saint Bo Yuan.
As usual, I will give my overall review first:
First point setting: 1.9/2
A series of big story frameworks, including the battles between the three prehistoric clans and the secret mischief of the Western ancestor Luohu. The male protagonist's identity as a time traveler changed the development of the original story, and it also brought attraction to the story, but it was not worth the effort. The identity of the time traveler in this article is simply so thin that it makes people feel terrible. Point deduction: The setting of the time traveler is weak.
Second point characters: 1.3/2
I can accept most of the character settings, but the most important setting of Qi Yuan, I personally think is enough to overwhelm all character settings. The simplest question, what kind of person is Qi Yuan? I have said many times how indifferent and indifferent this person is, but when I encounter Patriarch Boyuan's treasure trove of heavenly materials and earthly treasures, he immediately becomes weak-footed. The indifferent image that stood up in an instant was completely washed away by the rush for the treasure. P. S. I personally think that the protagonist of the novel cannot be as indifferent to everything as a dead chicken, otherwise the story will have no high point at all. Points deducted: The character of the protagonist is broken.
Point 3 Text: 1.6/2
In fact, the problem with the writing is not that big. It has the feeling of a book I heard about in the early years or a superficial chapter-style novel. But I personally think there are still a lot of shortcomings. For example, the transition method is extremely stiff. It mainly relies on hundreds of years later or XX state XX palace or "——" to transition. It looks extremely stiff; the stack of words is annoying to read, let alone the top ten demons and the top ten demons. Next time you write a Manchu banquet, I will have to read them one by one. Points deducted: Insufficient transitions.
Point 4 Myth: 1.3/2
The story uses a story mainly based on the myth of Honghuangliu. In fact, it is an ordinary cool novel. If you read the first twenty-five chapters carefully, it is just a plot of returning to the Qing Dynasty and becoming a prince. The so-called mythical events are simply nonsense. Peel away this layer of superficial magnificence, and you will find that the inner mythical atmosphere is actually quite weak. It only explains the creation of the sky by Pangu, the disappearance of the gods, and a mythical event. Most of the other parts are based on the stories of ordinary people in the mythical background story. There is not even a decent mythical event mentioned in the background, and there is no feeling at all. I can't tell whether the whole world is prehistoric or not. Points deducted: superficial mythology, lack of events shaping the atmosphere of the big world.
Point 5 Others 0.5/2
In fact, the following point should be attributed to the first and fourth points above, but I will open a new one for the time being to avoid vomiting. Did the male protagonist watch The Romance of the Gods, Journey to the West, or The Controversy between Buddhism and Taoism? He just came here after reading the online article once. If nothing else, when I saw Zhen Yuanzi, I was ready to abandon the book. Come on, I'll give you Journey to the West, I'll give you The Romance of the Gods, what's Zhen Yuanzi doing here? Zhen Yuanzi is a cut-scene character in Journey to the West, something that does not exist in the traditional Chinese mythology system. You tell me that the male protagonist also knows his origins and had a good relationship with ginseng fruit in the ancient times. It is really strong. I won't go into the other issues one by one. I've basically never heard of the demon god in the opening chapter. The Twelve Ancestral Witches are fabricated. The villain Rahu is from Hinduism. The Yinglong Classic of Mountains and Seas clearly states that he is in the sky (the original text of the Classic of Mountains and Seas is "cannot go up again") and is now messing around with smelly fish and rotten shrimps in the river. I'm just curious about why the back is so round. For example, how did the Nine Infant Demon Saint die in the hands of Dayi, how did Yinglong and Phoenix Qilin discuss seniority, and so on. All in all, if we really want to discuss it in detail, the mythological system of the whole text is either based on other Honghuangliu novels, or it is simply wrong. Although Honghuangliu novels have almost established the structure of the world, it is really ridiculous for you to pull it in so directly, to say it so seriously, and to insist on giving the male protagonist a setting that is very familiar with myths and legends. Reason for extra points: To give face.
Come on!
This book is very interesting. Keep up the good work, the author.
My old friend, why haven't you updated?
An additional chapter, Taoist friends, please remember to take a closer look at the relationship between Dijun and Qingluo
It was so difficult for me to write this poem in an instant!
Pangu first created the chaotic sky, and Hongmeng Liangyi appeared in the wilderness.
The merits of opening the sky are so great, and they are transformed into the Three Pure Saints.
The demon clan's Emperor Wa is full of merits and virtues, and the creation of the world has confirmed the Hunyuan.
The second interpretation of Western Buddhism creates bliss, and the boundless sea of suffering appears.
The red clouds all over the sky make me sad, but I hope that future generations will clarify it again.
The top of Zhongshan Mountain is the Holy Palace, and the Tao and Fruit are self-generated and wonderful.
Saints from all the heavens have appeared in this world, and their merits have determined the heavens.
Dear old friend, Jun Xi came to check in and say hello! The short book "Nine Flows of Desire" is willing to show you more exciting things. Welcome to read. Thank you for your continued attention! Waiting for you to come! ! !
Red envelopes from the book circle will be distributed from time to time today! Remember to pay attention at any time!
I heard that the protagonist wants to be the Holy Father
My friend, haven't you updated recently?
It's been a long time since I've been here. It's so refreshing to see the big layout! Come on↖(^ω^)↗
8.18
I am Pikachu and Bi Diao, a down-and-out online writer. Today I am here to briefly analyze my views on this book, The Legend of Candle Saint Bo Yuan. As usual, I will give my overall review first: First point setting: 1.9/2 A series of big story frameworks, including the battles between the three prehistoric clans and the secret mischief of the Western ancestor Luohu. The male protagonist's identity as a time traveler changed the development of the original story, and it also brought attraction to the story, but it was not worth the effort. The identity of the time traveler in this article is simply so thin that it makes people feel terrible. Point deduction: The setting of the time traveler is weak. Second point characters: 1.3/2 I can accept most of the character settings, but the most important setting of Qi Yuan, I personally think is enough to overwhelm all character settings. The simplest question, what kind of person is Qi Yuan? I have said many times how indifferent and indifferent this person is, but when I encounter Patriarch Boyuan's treasure trove of heavenly materials and earthly treasures, he immediately becomes weak-footed. The indifferent image that stood up in an instant was completely washed away by the rush for the treasure. P. S. I personally think that the protagonist of the novel cannot be as indifferent to everything as a dead chicken, otherwise the story will have no high point at all. Points deducted: The character of the protagonist is broken. Point 3 Text: 1.6/2 In fact, the problem with the writing is not that big. It has the feeling of a book I heard about in the early years or a superficial chapter-style novel. But I personally think there are still a lot of shortcomings. For example, the transition method is extremely stiff. It mainly relies on hundreds of years later or XX state XX palace or "——" to transition. It looks extremely stiff; the stack of words is annoying to read, let alone the top ten demons and the top ten demons. Next time you write a Manchu banquet, I will have to read them one by one. Points deducted: Insufficient transitions. Point 4 Myth: 1.3/2 The story uses a story mainly based on the myth of Honghuangliu. In fact, it is an ordinary cool novel. If you read the first twenty-five chapters carefully, it is just a plot of returning to the Qing Dynasty and becoming a prince. The so-called mythical events are simply nonsense. Peel away this layer of superficial magnificence, and you will find that the inner mythical atmosphere is actually quite weak. It only explains the creation of the sky by Pangu, the disappearance of the gods, and a mythical event. Most of the other parts are based on the stories of ordinary people in the mythical background story. There is not even a decent mythical event mentioned in the background, and there is no feeling at all. I can't tell whether the whole world is prehistoric or not. Points deducted: superficial mythology, lack of events shaping the atmosphere of the big world. Point 5 Others 0.5/2 In fact, the following point should be attributed to the first and fourth points above, but I will open a new one for the time being to avoid vomiting. Did the male protagonist watch The Romance of the Gods, Journey to the West, or The Controversy between Buddhism and Taoism? He just came here after reading the online article once. If nothing else, when I saw Zhen Yuanzi, I was ready to abandon the book. Come on, I'll give you Journey to the West, I'll give you The Romance of the Gods, what's Zhen Yuanzi doing here? Zhen Yuanzi is a cut-scene character in Journey to the West, something that does not exist in the traditional Chinese mythology system. You tell me that the male protagonist also knows his origins and had a good relationship with ginseng fruit in the ancient times. It is really strong. I won't go into the other issues one by one. I've basically never heard of the demon god in the opening chapter. The Twelve Ancestral Witches are fabricated. The villain Rahu is from Hinduism. The Yinglong Classic of Mountains and Seas clearly states that he is in the sky (the original text of the Classic of Mountains and Seas is "cannot go up again") and is now messing around with smelly fish and rotten shrimps in the river. I'm just curious about why the back is so round. For example, how did the Nine Infant Demon Saint die in the hands of Dayi, how did Yinglong and Phoenix Qilin discuss seniority, and so on. All in all, if we really want to discuss it in detail, the mythological system of the whole text is either based on other Honghuangliu novels, or it is simply wrong. Although Honghuangliu novels have almost established the structure of the world, it is really ridiculous for you to pull it in so directly, to say it so seriously, and to insist on giving the male protagonist a setting that is very familiar with myths and legends. Reason for extra points: To give face.
Come on!
This book is very interesting. Keep up the good work, the author.
My old friend, why haven't you updated?
An additional chapter, Taoist friends, please remember to take a closer look at the relationship between Dijun and Qingluo
It was so difficult for me to write this poem in an instant!
Pangu first created the chaotic sky, and Hongmeng Liangyi appeared in the wilderness. The merits of opening the sky are so great, and they are transformed into the Three Pure Saints. The demon clan's Emperor Wa is full of merits and virtues, and the creation of the world has confirmed the Hunyuan. The second interpretation of Western Buddhism creates bliss, and the boundless sea of suffering appears. The red clouds all over the sky make me sad, but I hope that future generations will clarify it again. The top of Zhongshan Mountain is the Holy Palace, and the Tao and Fruit are self-generated and wonderful. Saints from all the heavens have appeared in this world, and their merits have determined the heavens.
Dear old friend, Jun Xi came to check in and say hello! The short book "Nine Flows of Desire" is willing to show you more exciting things. Welcome to read. Thank you for your continued attention! Waiting for you to come! ! !
Red envelopes from the book circle will be distributed from time to time today! Remember to pay attention at any time!
I heard that the protagonist wants to be the Holy Father
My friend, haven't you updated recently?
It's been a long time since I've been here. It's so refreshing to see the big layout! Come on↖(^ω^)↗