The Infinite Emperor

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‍ Then after seeing this, one suggestion is that you explain the reason for the existence of the university and the purpose behind it. The protagonist, as a person of reincarnation, should know everything. But, with this setting, I don't know if he can still complete tasks in the infinite world. . . ‍ But obviously you don't let him do his tasks in the world properly now. The peak is when he appears. . . No suspense and conflict points I remember when I first read Infinite Stream, it was about ordinary people step by step, and then they touched on the conspiracy of the master behind it. There is a reason for writing it this way. Your setting is too vague, which is very fatal. Your book should be for readers to read, not for self-pleasure. I also suggest that you either cut it off or make major changes. Set the outline first, otherwise you will not feel confused.

Come on!

‍ Well, after reading the first story, my first intuitive feeling was that I couldn't quite get into it. First of all, the positioning of the protagonist is very vague, giving the reader a very hazy feeling. Although I know you want to give him a special reincarnation status and present a sense of mystery, the effect is very average. Then there is the Snow White volume. Your trial as the Infinite World. The first volume is not attractive enough. It does not count as a dark fairy tale, and it does not count as a conspiracy. In the end, it is crushed by absolute power... It is very difficult to explain in words. ‍Then there are interspersed scenes of him missing his past companions. What you want to show when the protagonist's memory is revived is that his memories of the two lives have not been completely integrated, but the effect has not come out at all. It is better to explain these things later. There is a process, and it is useless to explain a lot of things. Sometimes it is more important to leave suspense and let the readers experience it for themselves. The personality difference between the protagonist in this life and the protagonist in the previous life is not highlighted. The first impression is that it is confusing, the writing is not clean enough, and the wording and sentence making are slightly awkward in some places. For example, when he is greedy and difficult to accept... It is very awkward. The plot at the beginning is either attractive enough, or the imagination is very big. You made a familiar Snow White, which is actually a failure. If the world of Snow White is foreshadowing, then you have to describe this world in the reader's imagination and beyond expectations, rather than a hodgepodge of chaos. In addition, the personality characteristics of the protagonist of Infinite Flow must be explained clearly in the early stage.

The author's logical thinking is a bit wishful thinking in describing this novel. The plot/the description of the protagonist's thoughts is a bit confusing. It feels like it has been pieced together at random. Many things seem inexplicable. The details of the story are not clearly described. I feel that the level is not enough, brother.

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I've only read 5 chapters now, and I think it's very interesting.

As title

Good evening, Xiaoyi. Wen Nian was in a hurry during the day, so I delayed it for a while, but support is never late. In the cold winter, I read great works, and I am full of energy, galloping through the heavens and the earth, across thousands of rivers and mountains. Reading it caught my eye and touched my heartstrings with joy. Come on, come on, give it a thumbs up.

I'm here, first order 500 months ago and recommend the complete set