
Walking with Sword
怀剑行
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- Classical Xianxia
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- 5mo ago
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- Zongheng
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Chapter 54: The author of the Dragon Mouth Green Pearl has something to say
Here are two books recommended by Zhang, both of which Chunfeng thinks are pretty good, and the author Chunfeng also knows them. One is "Restarting the Way of Heaven" and the other is "Ruyi Ge". Friends who are book-hungry can give it a try!
Give me your opinion
The author wanted to imitate Xue Zhong's writing style, but his writing was not strong enough. So many women have been written about, but none of them are memorable. The book I wrote feels like there is a main thread running through it. Everyone in the book feels like a puppet with no thoughts of their own. For example, in the chapter about Zhuang Yeyun's death, if you had told Xu Huaigu on the day before your death why you sacrificed your life to go to Middle-earth, your past and your views on the future. Tell me that your current entangled mood is much stronger than when Xu Huaigu said you loved her. It must be the first time for the author to write a novel, and there are many places where the writing is not good enough or cannot be done well. If you don't want to write trivia, don't write about so many women. And those women couldn't write about their respective characters and their own persistence. In summary, writing about people is not good. The people in the book are like puppets. They have no ideas and persistence of their own and only advance the main line in order to advance the main line.
If it were placed in ancient times, this rough guy would be considered a prodigal, hahaha
Suddenly I remembered what Jia Mu said in Dream of Red Mansions... "It is said that when a well-educated young lady sees a handsome man, she will be reminded of her life-long events. If her parents forget her, if she forgets her etiquette, she will become a human being and a ghost will become a ghost. What makes her a beautiful woman? Furthermore, for such a wealthy family, there must be many maids and nannies to serve the lady. Why is it that whenever there is such a thing, there is only the lady and a maid who follows closely? So these stories are made up by storytellers. "
No one wears flowers, no one persuades me to drink, and no one cares about drunkenness. Huang Gongshao of the Song Dynasty, "The Sapphire Case: Stopping Needlework Every Year on Society Day"
It seems to be the same as the previous chapter
Thank you for your kindness. If Lao Jiu talks too much and seems too hypocritical, please be more direct like this!
Those who carry swords dream of carrying swords, and those who carry swords are the best among men.
My poor little brain doesn't understand
What does this description of expression mean?