Dong Xuan Sutra

Don't always use "it", "it's", "but" and "but is". If there are too many such sentences, no matter how good the writing is in other aspects, it will still be a vulgar novel, don't you believe it? Take a look at Xiandu for yourself and see if there is such a word from beginning to end. I think your preface is much better than the novel. It is casual, deep, and emotional. Just like what is written in many novels, it blends into the artistic conception and the avenue, and your preface blends into life. Simplicity is beauty. Why do you have to use a lot of inexplicable words such as "it", "is", "but" and "but is" to superfluous things?

The writing style was a bit unfamiliar at first, and the plot wasn't very refreshing, but I gradually became more proficient. But there is a strange style problem. I wonder if you have noticed it: the author has a very strange grammatical structure. It is obviously Chinese, but it is English. For example, the author always likes to start an adverbial clause and put the person's name in the middle. There are occasionally a few harmless sentences in Chinese, but the author's articles are almost like this from beginning to end. I wonder if it is influenced by English? After thinking for a while, Xuanyin nodded slightly, "Kunlun Mountain is the place where the world's pure energy is contained, and it is quite good for him. He has been troubled during this period." Lian Dao didn't dare. Miao Mu was about to be polite when he suddenly heard three footsteps. He turned around and saw that it was Qingxu and Ji Junyao rushing over. Scanning Ji Junyao's eyes, Miaomu's expression suddenly changed. Although he disappeared immediately, Xuanyin still saw her in his eyes. He thought about it for a moment and didn't pay too much attention. He just wanted to take some time to ask. Although they were worried about Yu Qing when they came closer, Ji Junyao and his two daughters bowed to Xuanyin and others before anxiously asking about Yu Qing's injury. In response, although Miaomu was a little confused about the words "she and the two" mentioned by Xuanyin, she also knew that speaking and acting based on his cultivation level had profound meanings, so she didn't want to ask any more questions. After glancing at Qingxu, who had been lazing around since he had saluted to himself and others, Miao Mu had a hint of enlightenment in his heart. With a soft drink, Miaomu reached out and pressed his hand into the empty air, but it seemed as if he touched an invisible barrier.

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The protagonist is the Holy Mother. She casually saves two people at the beginning, and then takes in her younger brothers, a boy and a girl.

He also said that he would change it, but after reading it more than ten times, it still hasn't changed.

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