Realm of Disaster

After reading it carefully, I found that the last thirty chapters were a bit of a flash-forward. Let me tell you my feelings. Of course, they may not be correct, but they are just personal: At first, I felt that the overall progress of the book was too slow, and there was not much progress in the plot in more than a hundred chapters; There are too many secondary details, and they don't really help the plot progress; The third foreshadowing and introduction are well laid out, and the writing is quite fluent. The characterization and personality are a bit thin, but not as rich as the description of the characters' clothing. For example, the friendship between Zhao Liao and Pig's Foot progresses a little abruptly, and the progress with Witch Ning is a bit unclear.

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An overly detailed plot is like a colorful peacock moving its elegant steps, and the onlookers can hardly expect it to bring surprise or laughter to themselves. What they can appreciate is the colorful colors of the peacock, and these colors have already been seen when they start watching, so the onlookers will choose to watch tigers or other animals. I don't know if my evaluation is right or not, but I have read every word from the first chapter to this point. There are no typos or errors. Everything is good, but my expression has not changed. I think there should be surprises at least in a certain place, and there is delicacy in a certain place. The writing is very delicate, but no surprises can be seen. When most people are reading at a glance, few people can stay with this kind of writing. This is my point of view. Of course, if someone has time to read it carefully, there should be good reviews.

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The writing is quite good, the subject matter is novel, the plot is rich, there are some refreshing points and some touching parts. I hope the author will continue to work hard, and there will be rewards.

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