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Fattening

The beginning is too direct No description of the story background or historical background Rather embarrassing Then the character appears Appearance description is cumbersome So the text looks bloated The writing after that was very edgy. Especially marking names on character dialogues Gives people the feeling of reading a script

I bring "Judge Allure: Big Bosses Are Always Unmotivated to Work" to support DaDa, and I wish the book a great sale! 1

Come on, author~keep writing~

Keep it up until you read again, author, come on! ! !

Come on, the author, come on! Persistence is victory! I also have a book called "Animal Control Systems", let's work on it together! Come on, come on, come on! ! N

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This will be my new novel and will probably be released in December. Welcome to join us.

Make up the plot in your head

Sooner or later