Tianxing III

I'm so angry that you can't even speak.

Pay a visit and reward a beautiful woman

I was so blind that I mistook Master as a human being

The writing is very good, and it reads very smoothly.

After watching the end of the first major plot, to be honest, the character portrayal is quite good and the language is just okay, but the control of the plot is not good enough.

There are quite a few golden sentences, but the language could be refined, and the multi-perspective plot design should be more standardized, otherwise it will be difficult for readers to understand it.

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