Why Are There No Rivers and Lakes?

It's already pretty good, although the results are not good. There is always hope.

You need to update the egg pancake more often. I still like watching it.

This label is wrong, it is not a cool article, it is funny. I felt really uncomfortable watching it. The protagonist shown in the novel has a slightly low IQ and does not understand worldly things. However, men in ancient times were generally very precocious, and the male protagonist also served as a bandit for two years. Now the protagonist is in his twenties, and he still feels like a naughty pig. It is really uncomfortable to watch. Although the author is also describing the growth of the protagonist, it is still too slow and uncomfortable to watch. So I say this book is not a good book, and the historical background chosen by the author is the dark side of the imperial court and the world. There is a problem with the background setting of this story. It is really ugly for a good book to set such a background and make the protagonist a fool. Then let's talk about the protagonist's relationship with Sister Lou, which seems to be more uncomfortable. If the protagonist has always liked Sister Lou, there is still a chance, and it is interesting. What will be set in the future to go dark and snatch Sister Lou, kill the emperor, and bring down the entire dynasty? In this step, he will become a mature and stable character. This is a bit interesting. However, the author also set up Xiaoyue as the heroine, which means that the protagonist and Sister Lou have no chance, because as it is now Judging from the description of the novel's environment, Sister Lou is destined to be just an emotional experience in the protagonist's growth journey, so this kind of book is really uncomfortable to read, and it is not a good article at all. Moreover, the author probably wants to describe a kind of world in a turbulent era, and wants to have the kind of martial arts spirit that Jin Yong has always written. It can still be seen from the protagonist's words. Although it is stupid, there is a hint of meaning in it, which should be a foreshadowing for what follows. But this is its downfall. This book is a slow-burner. It has no effect in the early stage. Who will read it? Even if you update it to the climax later, it will take 2 years. Who will remember this book by then? It was so uncomfortable to read the early stage, and the subsequent plot may be so uncomfortable. Another thing is that the author has set the pattern at the beginning. He is an old man. On the surface, this world does not have longevity-extending skills or anything like that. It is a pure martial arts world with low martial arts. There is no exciting story like 1v1,000. The setting of the protagonist's skills and force value is also very confusing. It feels like there is no fixed value. , The protagonist has no master, no internal strength, no brains, nothing to ask for. He is just a good-for-nothing with good luck, and sometimes has the heart of a virgin. In any martial arts novel, what everyone discusses is definitely the value of force. Judging from the author's vague words, this book is like a fire, making it even more difficult.

Are you the only one who has a knife?

The writing is very good, but the typical grades are not worthy of the quality of the book. I felt deeply after reading it. Hey, such a good book only has this kind of grade, so I just have to be obedient and complete the work. I don't dare to ask for anything else.

Congratulations on the ending, it's very well written.

I need to explain to people what science is.

Come on~ (envious and jealous)

The writing was good at the beginning, but it turned sour later on.

Damn, hahahaha, so close to life